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sayll
By gumshoe
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the
seas
music
on a night |
such as this |
annihilates the
infinite within me
the world around me
and i let myself go forth_
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under the skin of the night wrapped in silence
a tender and unmoving slumber where
death welcomes me ashore
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Copyright 2013 gumshoe
Published on Friday, March 15, 2013.
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On Thursday, January 4, 2018, Cassette
(1087)
wrote:
This..... holy wow. the stars, the sailboat... the imagery inside the image; a concrete poem that I could never hope to live up to.
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On Sunday, September 3, 2017, Mute Serenade
(389) wrote:
This is so stunning! I love it so.... Beauty in the words and formations.
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On Sunday, September 3, 2017, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
Dammit straight, sister from another mister!
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On Saturday, January 28, 2017, Anna McCarra
(357) wrote:
Amazing, both visually and poetically.
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On Tuesday, March 1, 2016, blue
(1409) wrote:
Some poems are just so immediate, penetratingly powerful, that they eclipse distances and enter deep into the blood, where we have no choice but to make them our own. Pure poetic magick at play here. ~b
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On Saturday, April 18, 2015, Intoxicating Delirium
(273) wrote:
This is beautiful, I love it!:)
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A former member wrote:
This poem just ranked you up to a higher class of poets in my book. This is a skilled visual.
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On Thursday, November 28, 2013, Hands_Around_My_Throat
(67) wrote:
I love the imagery coupled with the wording. Beautifully done!
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On Wednesday, October 16, 2013, blue
(1409) wrote:
Had to come back to this.... as I am sure I will again. ~b
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On Saturday, October 12, 2013, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
Simply stunning..A wonderful work of art, to both read and to gaze at.
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A former member wrote:
Under the skin of the night wrapped in silence, that's an awesome line and my favorite line.
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On Saturday, October 12, 2013, blue
(1409) wrote:
This is truly deserving of 'Poem of the Day' ....and then some... and the some... ~b
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On Sunday, July 28, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
Love this and your significance of writes:)~ Bows to you****
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On Friday, July 19, 2013, Despair
(31) wrote:
I have come to the conclusion that you are a genius.
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A former member wrote:
This is one of the most beautiful examples of concrete poetry that I've ever seen. Wow! High kudos!
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On Sunday, May 12, 2013, King_Crazy_Dave
(45) wrote:
wordboat is calm, I was about to get all picky about shapes and poems and then i sighed. but the sigh was happy. wordboat is calm.
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful.
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On Thursday, April 18, 2013, Alchemist
(679) wrote:
Always fun and with words like the wind in the saylls.
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On Sunday, March 17, 2013, Corinthian
(306) wrote:
Aw this is so beautiful ....so creative .
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On Friday, March 15, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...gentle breezes & peaceful waters. your words on linen sails...
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