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An Angels Song
By Ladyhawke
Fragments of moments
abducted from
dreams
carry with them angels
through a garden
whilst she sings
A haunting fair note
grabbed heaven by ear
thy planets as witness
dote her presence
they appear
Crash wave upon rocks
or breeze 'mongst the hills
'tis like her
presence near
like a prophet
once fulfilled
She sings of her chains
a dungeon confined
kept her Pandora's box
locked in her heart
and her mind
She craves, no, she lusts
to realign
the stars
to gain Luna's mercy
for her kindness
stretches far
A cloud leaf'd entrance
your dreams drip sorrow
her melancholic song
whispers to her
".... tomorrow."
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Copyright 2013 Ladyhawke
Published on Thursday, January 17, 2013.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
A new start....Comments on "An Angels Song"
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A former member wrote:
Very beautiful with hints of sorrow for the songstress. Just captivating really
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A former member wrote:
Just beautiful... The melody is so gentle, so soft, the images... there's so much that can be said about them. I'll just mention the first two lines (killer start for the poem), the Pandora bit and "your dreams drip sorrow" (both the alliteration and the image behind the words). Those were my favourite, although the poem is too beautiful and organically whole to be dismembered like this.
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On Thursday, July 4, 2013, brudie
(14)
wrote:
Emotional, food for thought. Strong, keep it up. Great poem
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On Thursday, May 2, 2013, johnbevan17
(52) wrote:
I've been away to long. This piece is beautiful the mother nature/world/universe very powerful me thinks. I enjoy reading you "me lady"
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A former member wrote:
Oh so Powerful and shimmering throughout. It is a genuine honor to read you again. It's been so long I hope things are maneuvering well for you...My Ladyhawke.
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On Friday, January 18, 2013, Tartis Flammis
(14) wrote:
I teared up reading this. Amazing pen.
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A former member wrote:
I love this. Absolutely Awesome
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On Friday, January 18, 2013, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
Very delicate, ethereal imagery and subject matter. Makes me feel like I'm floating, perhaps closer to the same new beginning.
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