Comments by johnbevan17

  • "Nice to read you, Ladyhawke its been a while. I've been here before. The pain passes, the tears dry, but eventually we find that spark, that feeling. And hopefully the next time it happens the pain doesn't return, and hearts aren't broken. "
    Posted by johnbevan17 on "Dysfunctional" by Ladyhawke
  • "We alway dream to be free, but truly are we? We need to be educated to read and write yet we rebel, in order to be creative we need to be educated, yet we rebel against it. Love the piece Your's truly the Renegade ;) lol"
    Posted by johnbevan17 on "The True Rebellion" by Ladyhawke
  • "I've been away to long. This piece is beautiful the mother nature/world/universe very powerful me thinks. I enjoy reading you "me lady""
    Posted by johnbevan17 on "An Angels Song" by Ladyhawke
  • "An awesome tale of vengeance Malcholm Reminds me of a western as serenesavage says more along the lines of Pale rider with a twist. Loved it and thank you my friend.:) "
    Posted by johnbevan17 on "The Damnation" by Malcholm Dark
  • "p.s I love you. I love this elisa sometimes I think, people think they say those three words to much. though there's not much else to say when you fall in love and feel that way. awesome write and to the point Thank you for sharing :) "
    Posted by johnbevan17 on "p.s. i love you" by elisa
  • "Excellent my friend:) A fitting tribute to the falling youth and the monotone teacher that put you to sleep. So you can catch up from the night before. Thank you! Brings back the good memories:) "
    Posted by johnbevan17 on "Narcoleptic Youth Gone Wild" by Malcholm Dark
  • "Some memories go, we lose them in time, The ones we remember, are sometimes unkind, but the ones that are good, warm our hearts inside. awesome write:)"
    Posted by johnbevan17 on "Memory" by Cindy-ydniC
  • "If they truly love you they will wait forever. If they could set you free, would you go with them to see the stars shine? would you go with them if they could stop time, just for one minute to show you the beauty of the land, the trees, the gentle breeze, the colors of the wild flowers as they move on the ground. Awesome write I love this. :) "
    Posted by johnbevan17 on "Unseen Beauty's" by Ladyhawke
  • "The pain from losing another brings out the best from within us when it comes to writing poetry. At least that's the way it started for me. This is a wonderful heartfelt piece and I felt every breath, fall and hope for recovery. write on:)"
    Posted by johnbevan17 on "You Gave My Wings Away" by Lylani
  • "Oh Saint, I know this person all to well, she was my wife, the woman from hell, cried abuse from relationships past, and just one month the marriage did last, awesome write.... write on..:)"
    Posted by johnbevan17 on "Before the Times Have Come to Kill" by SaintNHB
  • "It hurts when your left alone when someone is gone. The pain inside sometimes hard to gone. But we live each day, some how find away. the Romeo and Juliet complex is all to familier to us who lose someone close. This is an awesome write and I hope you find that, which you so painfully lost again. write on:)"
    Posted by johnbevan17 on "Bittersweet Lullaby" by Invisibledarkness
  • "When we think of times past it's usually when the skies are dark, or it's raining. We each live from day to day trying to look forward to the new tomorrow. I enjoyed the poem and the flow , An enjoyable read Thank you."
    Posted by johnbevan17 on "Midnight Eyes" by Ladyhawke
  • "A lot of use feel like we just want to get up and walk away. Destroy what we've built and begin a new day. The trouble is we need money to do things in this life. good topic "
    Posted by johnbevan17 on "Gear Down Big Rig" by Huey Lewis
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