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'And Then They Came - (Feat Detriment)'
By LostInDarkness
Nightfell falls as the moon rises
..Underneath..
Pains deteriorate
Into discrepancy
See indicated pale scopic; grins
..Smirking
At us and kin
Run!
As demonic creatures gather
Cunning explicit things
May happen..,
Twilight skys become
dim,
Gusts of halcyon
Beasts begin their hunt
Pulsating
skin
Hideous...
I flex at its shouts; screams
Let
the chase begin
Hide from sight
Hope the only answer
As
they could catch
Our scent
Proceeding forth
They
stop..
Holy cow!
We'd better not pace
This is not
what you'd call space
So breath held lightly
And hearts
beating
Thoroughly out from chests
We settle the sound
To
a muffling hum
Sweat drips down...
They saw us
Deep in the dark
Black cannot elude them
Nor could our smells
One swift hit
..Bodies adrift..
And mauled
Blood
drips down
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Copyright 2012 LostInDarkness
Published on Monday, September 24, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Detriment is a great writer, and, i most say, wonderfully poetic. thanks detrimentComments on "'And Then They Came - (Feat Detriment)'"
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On Monday, September 24, 2012, Star
(879)
wrote:
Wow.. Luke is amazing when he comes to writing, and with you to match with him in this is also wowerfull :P well done here (:
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On Monday, September 24, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
A very fun write - glad you were able to hook up last night - lol. Luke wasn't easy for me to write with as his style can be hard and even intimidating to match, but this flowed very nicely, congratulations - XXOO
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On Monday, September 24, 2012, ApathysKiss
(377) wrote:
was a little jagged in the beginning but started to flow at 2nd half onwards...some spelling issues, but overall intense and ominous, almost a sense of foreboding...-=*AK*=-
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