Break Down, Sweet Malena {w.blue angel}

By FadedBlues

I often wonder, Malena, are we insane,
or merely addicted to the pain?
 
I chose you, as you are the most angelic maiden in all of
the surrounding villages. sweet child of innocence, as you
hang in the merciless chains. your glory enrages Athena,
and your beauty reduces Helen to a simple char-woman.
 
under the urging of my whips and my cane, your
screams regale the night, primitive as a beast –
something wild howling in the moonlight.
 
your cries hold a melody, a dirge fashioned by the
mingling of your torment and your ecstasy.
In these Cimmerian shadows, such is my symphony.
 
I treasure the scarlet welts rising on your perfectly
sculpted flesh. you are divine as Galatea,
and I exalt in my artistry…
 
Oh, Sweet Malena,
my pain sculpted temptress
ill-used, swaying pendulum princess.
 
unsullied innocence shrouded in agony,
twisting and struggling against my snarling chains (parody?)
 
Darling, you’re my stained, fervent invitation,
silken flesh, sultry, salted, fetishized sensation.
 
you cast carved, erotic cries
of torment, sating my scornful eyes.
 
a lust feast in distress, woven sin for soldier men.
beautiful outcast, night’s wish, thrusting little dish.
 
my unrestrained hunger drags its teeth against your jaw.
not even the Belgium Wall can save you from my gnaw.
 
Sweet Malena, withheld from soft caress,
a diseased luxury, exploited, filthy lust fest.
 
scantiness sewn in enemy dreams –
Sweet Malena has broken, it seems…




 

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Copyright 2013 FadedBlues
Published on Monday, August 12, 2013.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Such a romantic and beautiful poem.

  • Deathkitten On Wednesday, August 14, 2013, Deathkitten (573)By person wrote:

    Mmm very tempting read. She will always want more...she just might not beg for it ;) Awesome pen, you two!

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, August 13, 2013, FadedBlues (2172)By person wrote:

    Friends, thanks. Malena is a willing stress reliever & blue angel is a skilled accomplice...

  • haunted On Tuesday, August 13, 2013, haunted (851)By person wrote:

    very nice you two, a great partnership in poetry. it blended well, has excellent flow to it and the poem is very well done. awesome Kendra and mr. blues!

  • BlackVelvet Rose On Tuesday, August 13, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose (175)By person wrote:

    beautiful write... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Lovely imagery. You two are a fine match in poetics. I'd be jealous but you, fb, n me have way too different styles haha. "You cast carved, erotic cries of torment, saying my scorn" that's a work of art in itself. Great job Scholar

  • NarcissusNarcosis On Monday, August 12, 2013, NarcissusNarcosis (94)By person wrote:

    Very nice, beautiful...a little erotic abuse, nothing better..."a lust feast in distress, woven sin for soldier men; beautiful outcast, night's wish, thrusting little dish.." Wonderful poetic flow..and you broke Malena...yes, I'm sure she does want more! Great post you two -NN

  • Devilish On Monday, August 12, 2013, Devilish (2662)By person wrote:

    fadedblues .. i promise i seen this coming. i was waiting on it. absolutely worth the wait. beautiful.. Scholar

  • blue angel On Monday, August 12, 2013, blue angel (877)By person wrote:

    Beautiful blues* Sweet Malena told me the pain was worth it...I think she wants more.... :)~~ Thanks, Dev :)~

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