Comments by NarcissusNarcosis

"mmm...very nice... this reads with the voice of a ssssnake...and it couldn't be better. I always love your ssstyle, and this one is no different... too many favorite lines to quote just one... oh yes, I'll be back to thisss... but for now, I'll go curl around myself -NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Smut StaiNed ...." by Devilish

"I love the mix of German in this...the title immediately caught my attention...such an aggressive language...and it is used appropriately here...beautiful writing, glowing through schatten... -NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "in schatten" by FadedBlues

"In the end...hopelessness ..."
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Color Me..." by NarcissusNarcosis

"Awesome. saying that this is badass isn't doing it justice dude. I'll be back"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Too Young To Live Forever" by Sean Mc Shane

"Very nice, beautiful...a little erotic abuse, nothing better..."a lust feast in distress, woven sin for soldier men; beautiful outcast, night's wish, thrusting little dish.." Wonderful poetic flow..and you broke Malena...yes, I'm sure she does want more! Great post you two -NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Break Down, Sweet Malena {w.blue angel}" by FadedBlues

"I like this...words of climbing out of any hole you may be in, brushing yourself off and preparing to start fresh...very nice! Welcome to DP, look around and comment on others' works, as it will bring them back to your works...look forward to seeing more from you! -NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "The Dark Clouds" by Gothchic

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Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Sex With A Dictionary!" by NarcissusNarcosis

"Another poetic write... I like your usage of quotes in your work, well placed and nicely accentuates lines coming from another..."..heartfelt release, birthmark fear.." You make a deep impact with few words...great post, much enjoyed -NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Red antlers" by Dancing_Monkey

"This post shows some serious poetic skill, your imagery is impeccable and flourishing throughout...it is strangely calming, relaxing in some way to read it...you have a true talent for portraying your emotions in a way that makes the reader feel it; as this is one of the main and ever-elusive goals of poets, I can't think of a greater compliment to give...Brilliant post -NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Fruitless." by Dancing_Monkey

"This is an incredible story...doesn't even feel right to call it a 'story'; it is heavily poetic and thought-provoking...I am probably repeating previous comments, but I am a little short on words with this one. I read through this a couple times and I see it differently every time; that is something only the deepest poems manage to achieve... It feels like everything is on the surface, readily obvious, but it has great depth...your closing lines couldn't have ended this any better, it added so much to the overall point and impact...again, incredible work here. I will come back to read this post again, thank you -NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "a paper filled alley" by Dancing_Monkey

"Wow...yes, this is incredible writing, it is nice to come across something that is tough to compliment properly... every word and line in this adds to the feeling you deliver...indigo ink that bruises the page with these vainglorious words..." Absolutely beautiful, poetry at its finest... Love it -NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "the night calls" by FadedBlues

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Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Sex With A Dictionary!" by NarcissusNarcosis

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Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Sex With A Dictionary!" by NarcissusNarcosis

"To close this off, I would like to say: this site is built around the idea that anyone can be a poet, and I fully respect that. I may not like some poets on here, and one of my biggest pet peeves is misspelled words, but it is anyone's right to have an account on here. I have never read about any criteria or skill levels to meet, but if I have missed something, please inform me. Thanks to everyone for the comments! Have a great evening"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Sex With A Dictionary!" by NarcissusNarcosis

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Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Sex With A Dictionary!" by NarcissusNarcosis

"Thank you dwells! I was wondering if anyone would catch 'Sisyphean' or know the mythology of the word"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Sex With A Dictionary!" by NarcissusNarcosis

"Your structuring style lends well to this piece. The hyphenations help accentuate certain parts, 'Hal-f- Torn'...I like it, your writing is interesting and original. Poetic work here, cool post -NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "Maggot-Go-Round." by Strataic

"Very neat, well-written... "..caressed magic from Moon-vivid illusions; and As whispers wrangled senses, We found the ground-This wraith became me..." I like it. No offense, but I appreciate when someone points a typo out to me; 'one leg to many' supposed to be 'too', or did I misread? If so, my mistake; either way, awesome post! -NN"
Posted by NarcissusNarcosis on "A Poets Electrified Paper" by Strataic

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