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Fruitless.
By Dancing_Monkey
Freely she entered my free flow fantasy
Sleeping on the shores of my symbol, to be washed away
By the tide of time
Honesty crush; Bending every inner hope
Lupine divinity unmasks the harlequin
One day flawless passed before me, the scent of dawn
Static insomnia, the scar to seal.
The length of my disillusion
Into the mist majestic eyes.
From damnation; delicate decadence
Seduction stands before you, the drumstick breach
Ripples banned, prefect submit
Transcript, confusing gaze
The seal of Anubis
Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited.
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Copyright 2004 Dancing_Monkey
Published on Saturday, June 26, 2004.
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On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, NarcissusNarcosis
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This post shows some serious poetic skill, your imagery is impeccable and flourishing throughout...it is strangely calming, relaxing in some way to read it...you have a true talent for portraying your emotions in a way that makes the reader feel it; as this is one of the main and ever-elusive goals of poets, I can't think of a greater compliment to give...Brilliant post -NN
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On Friday, April 20, 2012, Magdalena
(615) wrote:
Great imagery, you weave your words wonderfully, another excellent write.
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On Monday, May 12, 2008, insanemonroe
(16) wrote:
I like this :) -kat*
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On Wednesday, April 30, 2008, The Lipstick Factor
(290) wrote:
This is like floating, soaring...then remembering that you can't fly...i feel drawn in..
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A former member wrote:
A wave of emotion.
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On Tuesday, February 19, 2008, Rebel tiGer King
(258) wrote:
this is keleidoscopic relaxation, projecting images of rythm to stillness in the air, excellent beat brother -symph-
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A former member wrote:
your words are like diving into a pool, closing your eyes underwater, and letting your body go limp as you slowly coast out and towards the surface.
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On Sunday, July 8, 2007, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
Man, just more justification for my big hearty click action. This was slammin' poetics sung with grace so subtle and delicate. Wonderous. -Carl
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On Thursday, June 14, 2007, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
and we can dance dance dance, through the fire... From the first line on, it's like spinning in the indecisive arms of a passive agressive lover. Like I said, man. I want music on dis.
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On Tuesday, June 12, 2007, Midian
(19) wrote:
Wow. I have a lot to learn. This is fucking awesome! Great write.
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On Wednesday, May 16, 2007, glasshouse
(548) wrote:
This piece is particularly pulling. One word draws to the next. 'to be washed away by the tide of time' Well done, sir. Indeed. -Jes
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On Saturday, January 13, 2007, Sin
(1168) wrote:
i dont think anything i could say would do this justice or hasnt been said already..this was exquisite, prefectly rendered brilliance ~kristy
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On Friday, October 20, 2006, hate_doll
(265) wrote:
yup..brilliance
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On Friday, May 26, 2006, Mathesix
(40) wrote:
at first glance.. a meaningless jumble of words..but then I really read it..and I have to say that I'm impressed. such originality!
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On Tuesday, May 16, 2006, vaultgrl
(185) wrote:
.....breath taking.....i love your originality in your style and the words you chose.....great write...
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On Friday, December 16, 2005, coly
(54) wrote:
i think your aswome your trippen if you think your bad
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On Monday, November 28, 2005, Grim_Sorrow
(75) wrote:
Loving the extent of your vocabulary, it brings so much more to a work such as this.
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A former member wrote:
A darker side to romance. what i love 'bout your owrk. We share a bond, we do yup yup
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On Wednesday, June 1, 2005, smearedXmakeup
(19) wrote:
One day flawless passed before me, the scent of dawn & into the mist majestic eyes. My favorite
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On Saturday, February 26, 2005, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
Your style is definatly unique. Beautiful work. You should smack me for not reading you sooner ::has a feeling you will::
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On Saturday, February 26, 2005, Forgotten Angel
(310) wrote:
unique..very "telling" 'nother awesome work..damn you've got a style i've never seen before..but i like it! -Kel
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On Saturday, January 22, 2005, Emptyness Inside Me
(171) wrote:
awesome write, very unique and beautiful, great job ~Emptyness~
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On Tuesday, December 28, 2004, Sepulcrawl
(78) wrote:
I'm not sure of your placement of lupine -- I'm not really sure what context you're presenting it in. However, the rest seems rather expressive. -pxc
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On Friday, November 19, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
This one is still great. Ciao, T/S
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On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Zhee
(529) wrote:
i agree.. absolutely elegant... the sheer eloquence of your expression left me breathless!
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A former member wrote:
Wow . . so elegant and graceful; a strange fragility, with an exquisite eeriness and complexity. Utterly enchanting . . ~ Rose ~
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On Wednesday, October 27, 2004, Delphoid-Q
(213) wrote:
Compelling...
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On Saturday, August 28, 2004, whisperer
(166) wrote:
oooh exquisite!
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On Saturday, August 28, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
... Deep inside Borneo, they are singing. They know that the drums of Congo are still alive in Brazil, and that a Danish writer feel them on his silent quill
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On Friday, July 30, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
very very nice.. i read this twice in hope of decerning this piece.. i feel it longing for something it could never have... *669*
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On Thursday, July 22, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
beautiful as beautiful can get my friend.this is a perfect poem if i do say so myself.*faves*much love,chris
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On Friday, July 16, 2004, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
The allusion to Anubis at the end fits your title well - I enjoyed this very much. Good one! Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
Oh, Monkey...this is definitely, my favorite of yours, next to Playfull like the Flame...I am certainly romanced by your writes. This one goes to prove it. Superb.
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On Sunday, July 11, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx
(108) wrote:
being calming, like a lullaby. The words appear softly to me...I like it.Beautifully elegant.
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On Sunday, July 11, 2004, Mademoiselle_Minx
(108) wrote:
I had to read this a few times and I still dont know what to say...Id like to say its 'pretty' but thats too simple.It has a dream like calmness about it.Like your looking out on a lake and can see the water ripping but rather then a ripple being negative
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On Saturday, July 10, 2004, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
aww, what a devine expression of life's most common complexity. great work monkee - Kryz
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On Wednesday, July 7, 2004, Midnight Shadow
(67) wrote:
Absolutely beautiful. This is a true piece of art. If art museums displayed poems instead of paintings and such, this one would be among the many displayed. ~Tracy
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On Sunday, July 4, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
love is ... higher than a mountain ... love is thicker than water ... there ain't much air up there , and the lightheaded euphoria has it's own language ... youre speaking it fluently my friend ... love birds fly too high , and speak in tongues like stone
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On Sunday, July 4, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
stoned cupids ... sing yourself aloud .. perfect note finds it's harmony - always ... as you now know .... too cool man ... funguy
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On Friday, July 2, 2004, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
*bows* peter what am i to say ur words seem to bring a meaning to me that i cant find at home anymore
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A former member wrote:
A refreshing breath of marvelous writing. Great story telling and good flow and word choice. Sehr gut! +T.P.U+
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On Tuesday, June 29, 2004, Loserland
(113) wrote:
really like it.... especially the tongue twisting last verse
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On Monday, June 28, 2004, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
i'm late, i'm late, and all the best comments are taken! hehheh... Truly excellent work. All the commenters before me are right. Fantastic. :)
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On Sunday, June 27, 2004, Malice In Wonderland
(987) wrote:
this was fucking great peter...need more room on my faves:(! kya
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On Saturday, June 26, 2004, Lynaes
(859) wrote:
Absolutely enchanting.. the wording and flow so dreamy and hypnotic, my favourite lines are "Lupine divinity unmasks the harlequin One day flawless passed before me, the scent of dawn Static insomnia, the scar to seal." absolutely beautiful, stunning.
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On Saturday, June 26, 2004, Clementine
(121) wrote:
holy shit, my jay dropped and i drop kicked it into a jabberjaw...so good, and slight alliteration, im a sucker for that, amazing, like always my denamrkian brother
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On Saturday, June 26, 2004, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
"Sleeping on the shores of my symbol"...*sigh*...that just pulled me in and sent me meandering along the rest. Nice work.
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