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Fruitless.
By Dancing_Monkey
Freely she entered my free flow fantasy
Sleeping on the shores of my symbol, to be washed away
By the tide of time
Honesty crush; Bending every inner hope
Lupine divinity unmasks the harlequin
One day flawless passed before me, the scent of dawn
Static insomnia, the scar to seal.
The length of my disillusion
Into the mist majestic eyes.
From damnation; delicate decadence
Seduction stands before you, the drumstick breach
Ripples banned, prefect submit
Transcript, confusing gaze
The seal of Anubis
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Copyright 2004 Dancing_Monkey
Published on Saturday, June 26, 2004.
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On Saturday, June 26, 2004, OLd SouL
(732)
wrote:
Static insomnia, the scar to seal... what a great line... what a great piece. Aww, man, you are just full of greatness. :) :::OLd -bananas and pixie dust for us.
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On Saturday, June 26, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Ow pretty strong words. I am happy for you, yet you have a way of making it sounds as a fear, instead of beauty. Actualy both in one, making it as honest in fear and in love. But still totaly rock like firm as the static it is.
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On Saturday, June 26, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
A weak mind would see it doubt where a mature would see it total dedication. Something that I think is maybe the most obvius yet hardest thing to get to know about you. Very cool. Tiger
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On Saturday, June 26, 2004, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
Also, fruitless is a great title I think
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On Saturday, June 26, 2004, girlafraid
(480) wrote:
Lupine divinity unmasks the harlequin-i am embarrassed to see that a non native english speaker can write much better than me ;) I agree with anth, your work has it's own signature monkeyness to it, ver original...always a pleasure
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On Saturday, June 26, 2004, Solace
(1069) wrote:
Whatfor this smile upon my face as i dazed in the dappled dawn of your words... Can't help but grin dumbly at this monkey, and that in itself is a compliment :)
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On Saturday, June 26, 2004, Anth
(1133) wrote:
this is just excellence,one ill read again and again,better than pulse even..very cool work,so much meaning originality and style i love this work!
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