stiletto street sex
By Taunting The Reaper
stiletto heels strike the pavement
like matchsticks lighting the streets aflame
sex sprawls across tinted SUV windows
windshields steaming
pointed heels flopping
amidst a world of pills and cash
lines and noses
smoke and mirrors
inhale, exhale
the tainted spirit
pounding the flesh
closer to oblivion
church bells ringing
in the distance
like hungry alarm clocks
high heels run from the sunrise
with glass pipes ready
with white rocks heating
and tragedy is diminished
as desperate minds cloud
with a messianic buzz
smooth and forgiving
as soft as dove feather filled pillowcases
smiling gently
blacking out contently
slipping away from eyes wide-open death
until waking moments
hear the streets calling again
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© 2008 William Bermudez
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On Thursday, January 4, 2018, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
beautiful...
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On Tuesday, September 18, 2012, PoetessDarkly
(693) wrote:
Lovely imagery!
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On Sunday, March 22, 2009, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
your imagery is alive....urban truth and fast wisdom is presented......well done..............urban
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On Friday, August 22, 2008, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
Absolute brilliance. Not one word out of place and deserving of so many more comments. -Carl
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On Friday, April 4, 2008, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
nice image there. i like how you brought in the discription of the church bells with that simile. "Conform! Conform. Follow the way" tho i'd gladly suffer through a day in hypocrisy preached sermons then be a slave to the sleepless white demon. wonderfully written.
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A former member wrote:
Some of this was familiar, and some of it was...very distinct with a brutality. Very well done. I enjoyed this thoroughly. Also, I love the title. Much respect.
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On Monday, March 24, 2008, Kaleidoscope_Heart
(111) wrote:
This reminds me of the book Crank. Sex depends on a hit, and a hit depends on sex. Lovely write as always
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On Sunday, March 16, 2008, denver nitze
(251) wrote:
very nice take on the lifestyle. i like it. very nice write. *cheers* ~ta
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On Sunday, March 16, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
god damn it. Why did I not write this.. *favors*