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Comments by Clementine

"finally some very original stuff. It felt very pieced together"
Posted by Clementine on "Lolitas in 1952" by Rebel_not_Radical

"staind died with acid washed neon"
Posted by Clementine on "GIVER" by veingo

"perfect form for the piece, nice job. A Gem in a shit pile"
Posted by Clementine on "My soldier's leaving" by Army Barbie

"some advice lose the rhyming, its takes away from your meaning. This is a piece of crap because of the rhyme but if you just wrote how you feel maybe its salvagable"
Posted by Clementine on "The Enemy in Disguise" by mywristshurt

"i just need to comment again, this is still crap"
Posted by Clementine on "AA" by Lord Kalgalath

"ack. This i feel needs work, the main flaw is the rhyme. I feel as thought the rhyme comes across WAY TOO forced (see rhyme about nips) if you make it less obvious/unnatural maybe the rest of the piece will speak volumes"
Posted by Clementine on "To My Love (Featuring James Lybarger)" by dark_goth_chic666

"eh, its why I wear the hat"
Posted by Clementine on ""giveing in tonight"" by Forever Cold

"eh somewhere in mississippi or something, during the motown days"
Posted by Clementine on "SemiAutomatic : Hittsville USA" by Clementine

"i love to fistfuck wyrms and worms and worries....you speak to me like an old sermun...if you ever come to NYC lets fuck...jamacan style"
Posted by Clementine on "Joked Heel" by Dancing_Monkey

"thanks for the comment, but i think you kind of over jumped the analysis"
Posted by Clementine on "Letterbox Buisness" by Clementine

"the form got fucked up but whatever "
Posted by Clementine on "Kennels and Gestures vs. Covalent bonds" by Clementine

"comment removed by DP admins"
Posted by Clementine on ".masturbation." by doll on the rag

"this is a form called a Haibun"
Posted by Clementine on "Junkyard Robin (part 2)" by Clementine

"did i spell shit wrong?"
Posted by Clementine on "Junkyard Sarah" by Clementine

"writersblockisabitch,soarespaces"
Posted by Clementine on "Junkyard Sarah" by Clementine

"the form is fucked up,the 2 and 4ht stanzas are supposed to be indented"
Posted by Clementine on "gunslinger gongs and the silent saloon" by Clementine

"haha i know i know, there are mistakes...it was grammtically torn apart in class, well whateve ryou get the idea"
Posted by Clementine on "The Tarantula Store and The Black Holes" by Clementine

"duely noted"
Posted by Clementine on "Fornication Under the Consent of the King" by Clementine

"yeah supposedlyu this is where the word fuck comes from"
Posted by Clementine on "Fornication Under the Consent of the King" by Clementine

"comment removed by DP admins"
Posted by Clementine on "ok, whatever you do don't ever press that fucking red button..." by Jonas

"hahaa shut up"
Posted by Clementine on "All Hands, Bury Your Dead" by Clementine

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