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The Dark Clouds
By Gothchic
I fell asleep with a pathetic self-hate feeling.
Awoke to a thick dark covered sky above me.
At this i smile and take a deep breath.
Yes, smell the flow of life on the earth...
Its time to germinate...
Rise above from the thick Earth that covers me.
Im buried under so much weight and pressure.
All i need is a crack in the sky to let out the rain.
The rain to give me life again in this dark gloom im in...
Rise... Out of the Earth.
Like a phoenix out of the ashes.
A new life. A new me.
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Copyright 2013 Gothchic
Published on Saturday, August 10, 2013.
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A former member wrote:
a new beginning.. leaving the past behind.. nicely done! :)
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On Monday, August 12, 2013, Gothchic
(37)
wrote:
Thank you all for such a warm welcome. This is very encouraging for me :)
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On Saturday, August 10, 2013, Deathkitten
(573) wrote:
Hmm interesting...this would be quite refreshing, it seems. Welcome to DP :)
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On Saturday, August 10, 2013, PoetessDarkly
(700) wrote:
welcome darkling, enjoy the darkness. great start. :)
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On Monday, August 12, 2013, Gothchic
(37) wrote:
Thank you for the warm welcome :)
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On Saturday, August 10, 2013, Gothchic
(37) wrote:
Lol Hello Devilish. I will do one like that for you :)
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On Saturday, August 10, 2013, Devilish
(2657) wrote:
I visualized that crack with a monster arising and taking control .. i love monsters,.. hello there you nice to meet..
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On Saturday, August 10, 2013, Gothchic
(37) wrote:
Thank you so much Karen and NN. I am so loving this place already :)
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On Saturday, August 10, 2013, NarcissusNarcosis
(94) wrote:
I like this...words of climbing out of any hole you may be in, brushing yourself off and preparing to start fresh...very nice! Welcome to DP, look around and comment on others' works, as it will bring them back to your works...look forward to seeing more from you! -NN
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