Buried

By SilentStalker

      It hurt...

...so much             

 

...to believe...                       

....that you had died.

 

 It hurt even more...

...to learn that you made....

...the choice

the CHOICE

...to not tell us otherwise...

Until someone told you it was the best thing for you...

 ...for you...                       

...what about me...?    

  ...where was I...?

...Oh yes, thinking you were gone...

GONE

...Too much has happened...

...too little was said...

 

...the curtain has fallen...

 

...the casket's been d

                              r

                               a

                                 p

                                   e

                                     d...

 

...I'm sorry...

 

...I can't bring myself to love again...

 

...that which I've buried so long ago...

 

 

 

 

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Copyright 2010 SilentStalker
Published on Saturday, January 24, 2009.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Poetry"
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  • ShadowPoet On Saturday, January 3, 2015, ShadowPoet (15)By person wrote:

    I thought that was an very detailed poem telling how it feels to lose someone you care for and loved very dearly

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, August 12, 2013, TropicalSnowstorm (1772)By person wrote:

    I like the flow and feel of this one a lot, as well as the barely provided details that make this at once attainable and mysterious. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • BetaWolfinVA On Saturday, February 16, 2013, BetaWolfinVA (894)By person wrote:

    Love the way that you did this :) good words, good flow... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: This is beautiful, darun. Scholar

  • daiglepoems On Friday, April 6, 2012, daiglepoems (106)By person wrote:

    That is one bad motherfucker.

  • Escape On Friday, April 6, 2012, Escape (58)By person wrote:

    What an amazing poem - loved it.

  • Crimson_Lover On Friday, April 6, 2012, Crimson_Lover (281)By person wrote:

    Amazing...

  • deadlyangel27 On Saturday, December 25, 2010, deadlyangel27 (94)By person wrote:

    Beautiful.

  • Chaos God On Tuesday, December 21, 2010, Chaos God (521)By person wrote:

    Heartfelt Write, Sir. Faint Reminders Of Loved Ones Long Gone.

  • ShadowFire On Sunday, June 13, 2010, ShadowFire (196)By person wrote:

    i really just do not know what to say accept.......write on.....~S

  • Miztaken4beauty On Wednesday, May 5, 2010, Miztaken4beauty (203)By person wrote:

    I love the format. it shows scattered thoughts and sleepless nights.

  • Iwas On Sunday, January 10, 2010, Iwas (41)By person wrote:

    The way you laid out the poem carried the words all the farther not that they wouldnt have gone far on their own. Very well done friend.

  • Mars On Saturday, January 24, 2009, Mars (333)By person wrote:

    Ouch.... *hugs* everythings gunna be alright. Selfishness is one of our strongest features, you don't forget that. Scholar

  • Aleas On Saturday, January 24, 2009, Aleas (181)By person wrote:

    Man, it's tough. To get through something like that intact, and remain a functional and contributional human being. It should never be a choice. It should never be so bad that there is actually belief that there IS a choice. I'm sorry.

  • Dissolving Poet On Saturday, January 24, 2009, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    :(

  • Dissolving Poet On Saturday, January 24, 2009, Dissolving Poet (564)By person wrote:

    I don't know what to say, I just know

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