The Final Observer (with ColorMeToxic)
By lupus tenebrae
Not a blue moon’s chance
in hell beneath
the skyline,
gamble your embers,
aces high and hot
tonight,
burning white, uncertain stars,
we can only
hope
they remain fixed in our sights
it's in death, stars
fall.
faceted there like diamonds,
Twinkle, twinkle
fading light.
Point of no return,
black hole's event
horizon
always threatening,
a cosmic middle finger
void of any consciousness.
Sapphire chalice,
be my
voyager, and yes,
my lunarscape too,
sans the craters
and regrets,
and yet, thrice the majesty
and thrice
the wishes,
forever lost in spaces,
never to be known.
The universe feels it when
one of its stars dies alone.
Alone, sidling
through Neptune’s sleepy eyelids,
without a whimper
and Cygnus, none the wiser,
that
her grace too, is dying.
Her only swan song
is a
dissonant lament
secretly relayed,
in blips of a concerto,
a touch of the ambient.
Pained whispers, hard sighs,
what have you in store for us...
endless universe?
it's almost as if you know
what will become of us next.
Will your trumpets blare
at dawn of Revelation?
If
so, sing sweetly,
your lullabies still matter,
and
your children are restless.
You lie in wait for
the
darkening of the earth,
sleep cycle reversed.
it's
then, in all your splendor,
we marvel at your beauty.
Author's Note:
An example of renga, and collaboration with my good friend Beth. I must say, it worked the cobwebs loose.Comments on "The Final Observer (with ColorMeToxic)"
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On Friday, September 30, 2016, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Intoxicating piece! I loved the imagery, and this was filled with great one liners, but the one that stood out for me was "The universe feels it when one of its stars dies alone." Great job both of you! Ciao, T/S
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On Thursday, March 7, 2013, Ravenblade
(307) wrote:
What an amazing flow of words....it definitely didn't leave the feel of a collaboration...very well done indeed.
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On Sunday, March 25, 2012, Gray Vision
(424) wrote:
I find my mom from time to time, looking over my shoulder as I read these amazing works of art. After reading a piece, she often asks, "who wrote this, do you know this person?" and most the time, I take great privilege in assuring her that, yes I do know the author of a particular piece. This is wonderful you two, I enjoyed this read. Collaborations are truly, a measure of the collective creativity, both minds are able to conjur and to make it work like this is nothing short of amazing. Thank you both for sharing and write on =)
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On Sunday, March 25, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Holy Craaaaaap.. DAMN!! wow.. freaking AMAZING!! how did i miss this?. oh wow. bows to you both.. a hell of a pair!! I mean damn it ran insync.. perfect!! i gota read it again..lol..
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A former member wrote:
Once i started reading it i couldn't stop reading it so captivating. Well done
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A former member wrote:
"aces high and hot tonight,
burning white, uncertain stars" captivating and an attention grabbed. ][ ][
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A former member wrote:
My sanity was converted by the middle finger line
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On Sunday, March 25, 2012, ColorMeToxic
(238) wrote:
I had so much fun writing this piece with you. Thank you.
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On Sunday, March 25, 2012, haunted
(837) wrote:
wow, this is absolutely amazing! what an excellent collab. *hello toxic*! i read this and it rolled out like a discovery channel program. a very in depth look at the heavens and all the stars, and its just a beautifully fascinating picture i got. and the ending really wrapped up nicely! great write you two!!