Comments by Melancholic VIncent
- "Great writing! I just want you to highlight some errors you gave, for self-learning. Watch out for "Peacefull", "ungreatfull", it should be said "Peaceful" and "ungrateful". Hope you didn't mind, it is for the sake of self-learning.
Continue on the path of poetry"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Silent Master" by darkheartmagic
- "Suicide intentions are meant to be in poems, not in people. I'm glad it went away. I sometimes have suicide thoughts but somehow I managed to share my room with them and llive along side them, they are there but they don't mess with my will..... at least so far.... I have a poem about this too, not really sure if it's a good poem but..... check on "Single Bullet Theory" on my poems if you want"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "My Suicide" by Lil Demon Lady
- "At least, something was saved. I was in a relationship a year ago and there was nothing to be salvaged from it, it was an unhealthy relationship and the person showed me in the end that she didn't deserved anything from me..."
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Gone." by Lil Demon Lady
- "Just feel like some poem, feels like something that have happened to you... If this had happened, I'm glad it wasn't the end.... Enjoy the reading though, really poetic and heart-felt"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "My Suicide" by Lil Demon Lady
- "Traumatic experiences can lead us to almost a state of trance that merges the present and the horrid past together for a few moments... The past and the present keep on trying to kill each other and we are caught in the middle of it. Yet, how could we explain such an intense battle to someone who never have fought in it?"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Nothing Happened" by Lil Demon Lady
- "A relationship that went sour? Is that what this is about? Relationships can be chaotic... And when we end up with someone that is not compatible with us (which I don't know if it's the case, just referring to my own experience) we will end up clashing hard against each other and that is ought to create some damage on each parts.... I hope you managed to overcome whatever that has happened to you and brought you such a sour taste to your mouth. Nothing hurts more than "unfulfilled desires", it's like a boiling mixture in our depth, eventually it's gonna want to surface in an explosive way..."
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Gone." by Lil Demon Lady
- "Sometimes we find people who such ability to hear and understand that it surpasses their job position. It might be her job but she wanted to listen, that's what is most important. And the fact that you didn't forget that person, it tells us good things about you too. "
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Her name is Tiffany" by Razor-kissed-wrists
- "At the time I wrote this, I was used to deal with everything that was happening with my mind already, but it was good to put it all in a poem like this. Since I'm 13 years old, I always thought I had some sort of mental illness... Turns out that I have a lot of traces of several mental illnesses but I don't have enough to make a diagnosis, maybe it's better this way.... I can be... interesting without being ill. Thanks for this."
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Pathological Cocktail" by Melancholic VIncent
- "Thank you for your comment. When you say, banging against the wall, it would seem you are referring to your experience of love, you tried and you tried time and time again which resulted in so much pain afterwards because it wasn't meant to fit.... That's what it seems. Have hope! Relationships are complicated and some are not meant to be, incompatible, it doesn't have to mean that is something wrong with us, sometimes it's something wrong with them, others.... we are just incompatible. Thank you so much for commenting :)"
Posted by Melancholic VIncent on "Alchemy of Emotions" by Melancholic VIncent
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