MoNSters iNSide Me...

By Devilish

Put your lips in my mouth... I wana taste your sin...
Swallow the desire to keep you within my skin...
As my body trembles... My mind rekindles...
The FlaMe that drives me inSaNe...
As I sort through the mess... We continue to undress ...  The rest...
Of our DeMoNs... Soaked in your SeMeN... I'm believin...
Everything you say...   So let us PrAy...  Into the night...
As it slips away..   It brings forth a new day...
And I love you still...   It almost has me wanting to KiLL...
The MoNsters iNSide Me...

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Published on Friday, February 26, 2016. Filed under: "Fantasy" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

4 U Draven...

Comments on "MoNSters iNSide Me..."

On Monday, April 29, 2019, Divine hell (249) wrote:

If I had to describe this in two words, it would be naughty and savory. Thus savory naughtiness is the perfect summary for this poem.
A former member wrote: I would love to drown my sorrows and pains in semen and vaginal fluids.
A former member wrote: Creative, clever, dark, and powerful piece this is. Erotic? Yes, but done in a way that is 'artistic' to read. Great rhyme and flow too. Keep writing.
A former member wrote: Almost... how has my dirty lil girl been?
A former member wrote: those last lines hit me hard.... I know what's that like... wanting to be undamaged for someone..so that you can love purely. but the key, i think, is finding people that love your monsters. you are lovely.
A former member wrote: The desire to be perfect for the one you love... Very well said, fucking unreal talent.
A former member wrote: I've been reading you...and you have the ability to write erotically but not lose your sense of flow that glues the work together. Praise for that, because a lot of writers forget one (or the other) when trying to do both! Semen...orifices...death... You have inspired me.
A former member wrote: That's A Beautiful Thing..
On Friday, December 28, 2012, With love_Crow (83) wrote:

You had me at I want to taste your sin. Exquisite!
A former member wrote: All of your works leave me nearly speechless and enraptured, but of those I have read so far, this one speaks to me the most and has left me rather inspired. Thank you for your bold, beautiful creations.
A former member wrote: Love love love!!
A former member wrote: Inresting and honest...well expressed your inner deepness reveals the color and that is black. That's it! I like it so much...
A former member wrote: hmm.. Seductive.. :)
On Sunday, June 3, 2012, Nehema (960) wrote:

This makes me love Draven. Perfectly executed and beautiful form - a great success - XXOO
A former member wrote: Interesting concept. Imagery carved in clarity as usual. Brevity packed with a striking presence. Thank you...
A former member wrote: this is one of my favorites from you so far. the end left me all...stimulated
A former member wrote: Made me feel seduced...Wow! Love it
On Tuesday, December 13, 2011, haunted (850) wrote:

wow very erotic! swimming in semen? damn draven, you need to drain that thing more often! this is really kick ass devil! great writting here babe!
On Thursday, November 17, 2011, WoundsLikeStars (56) wrote:

Very, very erotic. Love, love, love it, as usual.
On Wednesday, November 16, 2011, terris crimson (169) wrote:

amazing. hmm this sounds like an all to familiar fantasy.... :)
A former member wrote: This is sick!!!....
On Tuesday, November 15, 2011, MikeShank1989 (93) wrote:

A seductive write with a satin finish. Sexy verbage. Well done!
A former member wrote: I love this poem!!!!!!
A former member wrote: Do you read/write chinese. I need short phrase translated from chinese to english. Can you help me out?
A former member wrote: Wow! I love this poem. The lengths to which love will bring us...almost... I can relate.
On Saturday, November 12, 2011, terris crimson (169) wrote:

i love it hun.
On Saturday, November 12, 2011, dwells (4285) wrote:

I almost missed this one, somehow. What a profound profession of love; reminiscent of the western "Two Mules for Sister Sarah" for some reason. Very nice and snuggly, thanks.
A former member wrote: What a coincidence, I have a monster in my pants right now. =)
A former member wrote: Love your work. I'm truly inspired by you.
On Friday, November 11, 2011, Star (920) wrote:

as i said in all of your poems, i love them all. your just amazing. looooooove it
A former member wrote: Almost....
A former member wrote: Love the rhyme scheme and the imagery on this one, Dev. Ooooo-wee!
A former member wrote: I love the taste of these words in my brain. Your buffet has become my most favorite place at which to dine. Succulent and sexy, darling, as always.--Draven
A former member wrote: I love it. We must sort through the mess made by our own demons without losing faith. I get it.