she calls me baby
By FadedBlues
she stepped out of a place that is unknown to me.
she told me a name, but I can’t remember.
she spoke words like freedom, peace. they were
unfamiliar concepts. she pulls a thing out of the
air. she calls it passion. she calls it indulgence.
in my experience, I have not discovered these,
so how can they exist?
she dreams unreal dreams.
she says, if we hunt in the darkness, we will uncover
truth, which is a bright beacon, and will vanquish the
blindness of night. but this notion reflects stupidity,
which I cannot abide.
so I beat her.
life has wailed on me. it has made me an angry man.
I was made to be alone.
If she needs to cry, she goes in another room.
I tell her to leave, but she will not.
she stays with me, when there is no moon.
and there are no stars.
she comforts me.
she calls me baby.
Comments on "she calls me baby"
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On Tuesday, December 3, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
I like it a lot.. Ruthless is he that cannot touch or feel freedom, passion and peace without torturing. Nice write;)~
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On Tuesday, March 5, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Friends, thanks. I've been around awhile, & I've seen a lot of things, I guess that's what I write about...
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A former member wrote:
Hmmm... why do we torture ourselves, whyyyyyyy?
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On Monday, March 4, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Surely there are some redeeming qualities? Maybe she's hooked on your poetry, and they say madness is only a step way from genius, cheers!
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On Monday, March 4, 2013, BlackVelvet Rose
(175) wrote:
i think we stay because that is who we are... always trying to make things work but instead having them end up in a fight... but there are a sheltered few who will stay through anything and give all they have to the one they love... and to be honest it really doesn't matter what that person says or does they will never leave even if they are told do so....
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On Sunday, March 3, 2013, Nehema
(958) wrote:
We always hurt the ones that love us the most, I always wondered if it's because we can, because we know they'll love us anyway... - XXOO
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On Sunday, March 3, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Excellent write FB. Some men say that you have to treat women like shit in order to get them to stay and respect you. I used to have a hard time believing that philosophy, but I've seen it in full effect. Sad. But what an excellent write. Awesome. Later -
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A former member wrote:
This is deep man. I respect honesty. It is a mans world, what would we do without them faithful women. Our dogs may be our best friend but them ladies sure make for an easier death.
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A former member wrote:
There is a madness behind the man I read. I give you the respect you deserve for being a warrior a poet and so brutally honest. I bow to the giant and to davide.
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On Sunday, March 3, 2013, BetaWolfinVA
(791) wrote:
beautiful well written, hard to deal with women that love us despite ourselves
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On Sunday, March 3, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Damn.. a die hard woman for a die hard man. soldier in the arms of a soldier. a vet is a vet no matter the war., she suffers both of your pains alone.. then calls you baby. now that is passion. and its in the air. i love you fadedblues.