Comments by MikeShank1989
- ""We know eachother like old veins rupturing into bruises...."
That line was a revelation. I loved this. Like sandpaper on the cheek; never broken and always burning. "
Posted by MikeShank1989 on "Complicated Love" by TornPieces
- ""Never one taken with growing pains
stunted stalks wrapping round
thruway trackmark trains
their leaves dew-kissing trap house floors as
predicted
long before the tenants were evicted"
That first stanza was fire and set a phenomenal tone for the piece. Thanks for the recommendation. Well written! "
Posted by MikeShank1989 on ""Krissy"" by King_Crazy_Dave
- "Pretty intense. I'm lost, but it's intense. I feel emotion, I just don't know where it's coming from. You're a nuclear reactor!"
Posted by MikeShank1989 on "Untitled" by Full blame
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