her resume' on a restroom wall
By FadedBlues
her resume’ on a restroom wall
for a good time call_ _ _ _ _
little girl in her white sunday best
kept apart from the rest
away from the popular bad girls
fast girls in the jocks’ hot cars
torrid & topless under the stars
sheltered, & scolded for the slightest mistake
18 years was all she could take
she ran, one day, like a bat outa hell
to vagabond lovers & seedy motels
her ass was gold when she rolled in the hay
the devils would play & the saints would pay
working the highrise & penthouse at night
her morals were loose & her silk purse was tight
on toilet walls, her sexual menu
a satyr’s delight & a sadist’s venue
a veteran of heartbreak & bedroom wars
heaven’s the playground of angels & whores
she did it all!
for a good time call_ _ _ _ _
Comments on "her resume' on a restroom wall"
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On Monday, June 8, 2020, Princeton
(18) wrote:
I see another one like her everyday. Well written.
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On Tuesday, March 4, 2014, daiglepoems
(95) wrote:
yeah. you know that someone would pick up on that resume on the restroom walls. Kind of surprised it wasn't me. Good one. I'll have to keep my eyes open.
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On Thursday, February 20, 2014, Taunting The Reaper
(169) wrote:
Truly authentic in the way it comes across. Real life can be quite gritty and dark but it's important to see things the way they are.
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A former member wrote:
I enjoyed this work for its ability to paint a detailed picture, And although it touches on a taboo topic, most readers can still empathize with the subject matter.
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A former member wrote:
Perfect...love it.
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On Wednesday, August 7, 2013, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Overprotection leads to riots... Devils play n saints pay - right on, you know your subject well and always pen it so beautifully - XXOO
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Thanks Friends. there's an old movie scene w/Shirley Temple & another little girl. Shirley's wearing mink, diamonds, pearls, other high priced jewels. the other girls says: 'you're not a good girl!' Shirley says: 'are you kidding? you Gotta be good to get all this stuff!'...
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, LindaHagan
(3) wrote:
All too true of a sad story...wonderfully written..love it
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On Saturday, August 3, 2013, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
That was excellent FB, I could see it like a short silent film. That was awesome and very sad. Too cool. Later -
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A former member wrote:
I'm claiming you as my own from today onward... Back off bitches, he's mine.
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On Friday, August 2, 2013, blue angel
(866) wrote:
This is one tight write ;)~ Love it !!
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On Friday, August 2, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
I fucking love you..
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A former member wrote:
Awesome pic and a better poem your words flowed so well with a rhyme to die for
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On Friday, August 2, 2013, Intoxicating Delirium
(273) wrote:
This is awesome... It's the sheltered ones that always go crazy... Loved it :)