only the whores will mourn me
By FadedBlues
don’t bring me the face of innocence
purity & pigtails
needing a light kiss & tender caress
if your face is bold in my gaze
I will slap it
your hair in the gauntlet of my grip
your mascara’d tears will run like
black liquid sorrow
pooling as honey on your lips
the fire in my eyes will
prophesize your demise
in my chamber, there are no doors, no windows
strip away your denim & lace
my Jezebel remains naked
my chains & your pain will define you
faithless & fallen woman, sprawl on my bed
your flesh is my fantasy
I will taste the submission of your curves & hollows
my sex is violent & enthralling
your screams will delight me
the crack of your orgasm, a gift from Gehenna
when the devil beckons me
on a thundering night
the whores will drop roses on
my funeral pyre
Comments on "only the whores will mourn me"
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On Friday, July 31, 2020, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
and i love this everytime i read it.
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On Monday, August 19, 2019, sadistic intent hex
(206) wrote:
just read this and all I can say is damn. raw gritty and straight to the point.
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On Monday, March 18, 2013, Salty Ships
(30) wrote:
The subject matter was definetly appealing but more than that your writing style is powerful and raw. It's always nice to read something honest, something that emphasizes brutality without glorifying it.
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A former member wrote:
You have very dynamic stanzas.. And each delivered with bloody brilliant imagery. Grinned and guffawed by the last line..
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A former member wrote:
This is just f'n awesome!!! wow! Thanks for the super cool read! much enjoyed!
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On Friday, February 8, 2013, Stephanie Sideways
(276) wrote:
Omg I am so turned on after reading that! And I am out in public reading it :-0. I shall have to cross my legs and think about the washing pile! X x
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On Friday, February 8, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
Friends, thanks. angry sex is a bruising thing...
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A former member wrote:
wow..this somehow reminded me of those horrific scenes from movie "from hell". have you seen it?
thanks for sharing..:D
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A former member wrote:
*swoons* i must have the heart of a harlot because i found this quite romantic.
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On Wednesday, February 6, 2013, Deathkitten
(571) wrote:
Ahem...well written & very much my style. Just have to switch every once in awhile ;)
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On Wednesday, February 6, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Only the ones with a heart of gold, but then again, could be a majority - cheers, FB!
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On Wednesday, February 6, 2013, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Oh baby.. you know just what to say to fill my prophecies and longing for just one night with you . fuck me. omg.. yes yes yes yes...