Cerebral

By ColorMeToxic

Bound by mental vines,
my mind screams, within confines...
this thinking disease.

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Copyright 2015 Beth
Published on Wednesday, November 18, 2015.     Filed under: "Haiku" and "Poetry"
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  • The-Ardent On Friday, August 19, 2022, The-Ardent (25)By person wrote:

    A very pleasant read I'm glad I found this.

  • Cassette On Wednesday, November 8, 2017, Cassette (1144)By person wrote:

    the best of us are afflicted.

  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, January 26, 2016, carlosjackal (3011)By person wrote:

    I'm a sucker for a good haiku and this was no exception..Wonderfully penned 17 syllables of struggle.

  • A former member wrote: Very insightful on the struggle. I like the imagery it provokes

  • Star On Thursday, November 19, 2015, Star (920)By person wrote:

    I so hope you'll break out of your prison, sooner than later.

  • A former member wrote: This is cool the imagery was perfect I could easily see myself in the poem and beautiful haiku-Mrk

  • soul_versing On Thursday, November 19, 2015, soul_versing (882)By person wrote:

    A self made prison that harbors continuous thoughts that bleed silently beneath the surface. Ooh, appearing normal on the outer shell, only to fall internally buried at the core. I applauded this powerful haiku Beth. Phenomenal, you are! .tips hat and blows a kiss. Scholar

  • Phalanx On Wednesday, November 18, 2015, Phalanx (677)By person wrote:

    Good imagery in three lines takes some passion and some gonads. I like this.

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