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Cerebral
By ColorMeToxic
Bound by mental vines,
my mind screams, within confines...
this thinking disease.
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Copyright 2015 Beth
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On Friday, August 19, 2022, The-Ardent
(23)
wrote:
A very pleasant read I'm glad I found this.
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On Wednesday, November 8, 2017, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
the best of us are afflicted.
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On Tuesday, January 26, 2016, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
I'm a sucker for a good haiku and this was no exception..Wonderfully penned 17 syllables of struggle.
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A former member wrote:
Very insightful on the struggle. I like the imagery it provokes
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On Thursday, November 19, 2015, Star
(879) wrote:
I so hope you'll break out of your prison, sooner than later.
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A former member wrote:
This is cool the imagery was perfect I could easily see myself in the poem and beautiful haiku-Mrk
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On Thursday, November 19, 2015, soul_versing
(774) wrote:
A self made prison that harbors continuous thoughts that bleed silently beneath the surface. Ooh, appearing normal on the outer shell, only to fall internally buried at the core. I applauded this powerful haiku Beth. Phenomenal, you are! .tips hat and blows a kiss.
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On Wednesday, November 18, 2015, Phalanx
(628) wrote:
Good imagery in three lines takes some passion and some gonads. I like this.
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