By carlosjackal

The cloud
with the rainbow lining
on a Saturday
No knives.
No bullet holes.
Her eyes
like future rooms.

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© 2018 Carl Denyer
Published on Wednesday, March 9, 2011.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

6/11/2018: Reworking for “The Verbless Minimalist” contest.
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  • Mute Serenade On Saturday, September 16, 2017, Mute Serenade (466)By person wrote:

    Soul moves the moon. If orbit is a function of time I'd rather believe she's moving that :) beautiful poem.

  • A former member wrote: You really like the coast and the sea, don't you? I can see why. They are beautiful places where anything seems possible. Let the Poems Of The Day roll on in! Queen Reb:).

  • lupus tenebrae On Monday, March 30, 2015, lupus tenebrae (1016)By person wrote:

    I'm digging the delicate mysticism of this work and though it may not have fit the criteria, this is still a quality piece and I thank you for bringing it to my attention, I will now promptly bookmark it to re-read at my leisure. PotD well deserved. Scholar

  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, March 31, 2015, carlosjackal (2576)By person wrote:

    Many thanks, lupus! Yeah, I was chancing my arm based on the fact the lines were short :)

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Thursday, December 18, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm (1773)By person wrote:

    Beautiful piece, as always. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • A former member wrote: soft and soothing ..love the last stanza. brought some great images to mind. nice one carl. Scholar

  • elisa On Wednesday, March 9, 2011, elisa (1637)By person wrote:

    such a peaceful focus. very beautiful.

  • Malcholm Dark On Wednesday, March 9, 2011, Malcholm Dark (1040)By person wrote:

    soft, moving piece... nicely written... a pleasure to read, thanks

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