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Hope
By carlosjackal
The cloud
with the rainbow lining
on a Saturday
afternoon.
No knives.
No bullet holes.
Her eyes
like future rooms.
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© 2021 Carl Denyer
Published on Saturday, July 10, 2021.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
6/11/2018: Reworking for The Verbless Minimalist contest.
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On Saturday, September 16, 2017, Mute Serenade
(445)
wrote:
Soul moves the moon. If orbit is a function of time I'd rather believe she's moving that :) beautiful poem.
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A former member wrote:
You really like the coast and the sea, don't you? I can see why. They are beautiful places where anything seems possible. Let the Poems Of The Day roll on in! Queen Reb:).
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On Monday, March 30, 2015, lupus tenebrae
(872) wrote:
I'm digging the delicate mysticism of this work and though it may not have fit the criteria, this is still a quality piece and I thank you for bringing it to my attention, I will now promptly bookmark it to re-read at my leisure. PotD well deserved.
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On Tuesday, March 31, 2015, carlosjackal
(3016) wrote:
Many thanks, lupus! Yeah, I was chancing my arm based on the fact the lines were short :)
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On Thursday, December 18, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Beautiful piece, as always. Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
soft and soothing ..love the last stanza. brought some great images to mind. nice one carl.
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On Wednesday, March 9, 2011, elisa
(1616) wrote:
such a peaceful focus. very beautiful.
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On Wednesday, March 9, 2011, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
soft, moving piece... nicely written... a pleasure to read, thanks
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