enter the cold

By thefairytaleheart


murder a martyr
stare directly into the bullet wound
and see precisely the size of the soul

i wish i could leave you
i wish i knew how
you were never there for me
and i could never let you go

a shattered mirror is infront of me
relfecting shards of a person i don't know
i light a cigarette and draw a drag and
smoke fills my lungs and i choke.

i open my window
and welcome the cold.











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© 2007 thefairytaleheart
Published on Wednesday, February 28, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, December 4, 2018, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    Such a clever, clever visual work of art on display here. Fantastic piece of concise and succinct poetry.

  • rwb35 On Tuesday, October 20, 2015, rwb35 (64)By person wrote:

    I've been there, nice work

  • thefairytaleheart On Wednesday, March 21, 2007, thefairytaleheart (13)By person wrote:

    thank you. i was in a very bitter mood that day. im glad it came out at all cuz i was so blocked..

  • Lynaes On Saturday, October 27, 2007, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    You're very welcome, I'm glad you got it out.

  • Lynaes On Wednesday, February 28, 2007, Lynaes (854)By person wrote:

    Oh my god.. I am living this, right now. I feel every single line of this. My eyes were full of tears by the end of it.. I'm speechless. *fave* this is so amazing, for so few words.

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