Fuck You!

By Nail Bunny

*having just re-read some of the "comments" left on an earlier work, my mused called*

F
U
C
K

Y
O
U
!

That's all I have to say.
So my opinions aren't the same as yours.
So they are stereotypical teen angst. I realize that.
Do you think I care?

F
U
C
K

Y
O
U
!

I have reasons to be mad,
Reasons to rant,
Reasons to want the revolution I propose.

F
U
C
K

Y
O
U
!

No, I haven't read Marx,
but I know what a revolution involves.
No, I'm not moving out,
nor do I think I know everything,
but I do know some things that others,
even the ALMIGHTY "Grown-ups" and higher ups know.
When did Higher DP status give you permission to ridicule me?
When did I agree that not upgrading in turn surrendered my rights to be taken
seriously?
Who died and made you gods, to judge without knowledge?

Ask me what happened. Why I wrote what I did. I bet you'll understand then.
Or, you could take the easy way out. Ridicule this work. Tell me I'm just a stupid kid, that you know more than me.
Claim superiority, knowledge, a college education that lets you be the

s
u
p
r
e
m
e

being.

but whatever you choose,

F
U
C
K

Y
O
U
!

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© 2005 Nail Bunny
Published on Monday, December 19, 2005.     Filed under: "Rage" and "Rant"
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  • FlowMyTears On Saturday, April 18, 2020, FlowMyTears (54)By person wrote:

    Dude, i love this, as a new brand new member. I'm your fan. I want to say though: i hope your revolution means death to all humans, cuz in a sense it does for me.

  • thefairytaleheart On Saturday, September 23, 2006, thefairytaleheart (13)By person wrote:

    ive always loved your work. come on, you're nail bunny. the disembodied head that says what you think. the good concience.

  • Artanis On Friday, April 22, 2011, Artanis (56)By person wrote:

    well done...thats 'bout it.

  • A former member wrote: i liked that...but when time comes to say that to the people who need to hear it most, they dont want to hear it which is just as fucked up as everything else!

  • PoeticHellion On Monday, January 2, 2006, PoeticHellion (191)By person wrote:

    Well said, Jake.

  • Irioth On Tuesday, December 20, 2005, Irioth (7)By person wrote:

    Be true to yourself and shout your anger.

  • A former member wrote: Thanks! I hate myself too, tell myself to fuck off all the time. Thanks for jumping on board! ~Ship!

  • Nail Bunny On Thursday, January 26, 2006, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    kinda missed the boat here

  • lordshadow On Monday, December 19, 2005, lordshadow (153)By person wrote:

    I have no idea what piece of work this refers to, or what comments you're speaking of, but all I have to say is good for you. I admit, sometimes we judge too harshly too early without taking

  • lordshadow On Monday, December 19, 2005, lordshadow (153)By person wrote:

    the chance to even try and understand the reasons behind what others write. You have a write to be mad and speak out if you feel you were unfairly judged. It won't make others change their opinions, but

  • lordshadow On Monday, December 19, 2005, lordshadow (153)By person wrote:

    I commend you for sticking up for yourself. And you worded it very well, too.

  • Nail Bunny On Tuesday, December 20, 2005, Nail Bunny (161)By person wrote:

    Thank you. A bit of respect and consideration is all I'm asking for.

  • Delilah On Monday, December 19, 2005, Delilah (113)By person wrote:

    These get so old...~Delilah~

  • Forgotten Angel On Monday, December 19, 2005, Forgotten Angel (310)By person wrote:

    i like this Jake..some ppl..arent as nice as others...but i wont go there..but wow..im glad ur speaking out about it..i dont think ur the only one thats gotten comments like that..i know i have...but..awesome write, nonetheless -Kel

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