Fornication Under the Consent of the King

He licks the del-
icate flower

She devours
The mango fruit

They are the beasts
In Babylon

Though they have done
Not a Thing wrong

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Published on Friday, February 18, 2005. Filed under: "Poetry"

Comments on "Fornication Under the Consent of the King"

On Sunday, February 25, 2024, carlosjackal (2787) wrote:

This one's a keeper and a firm favourite. Wonderful and loaded in its compact form.
A former member wrote: like the almost subversive, subliminal capitalization of "Thing"; what could this 'thing' be?? hmmmm for unlawful carnal knowledge and such... g[r]asping write and so picturesque/burlesque
On Wednesday, March 9, 2005, manywalks (747) wrote:

wicked bit of minimalism, masterfully completed
On Friday, February 18, 2005, stormtalk (727) wrote:

i'm the beast in your babylon
A former member wrote: this is crazy. i dont know how to take it. i didnt like it, but somehow i found it sort of captivating? if that makes sense at all.
On Friday, February 18, 2005, Clementine (121) wrote:

duely noted
On Friday, February 18, 2005, Clementine (121) wrote:

yeah supposedlyu this is where the word fuck comes from
On Friday, February 18, 2005, Jonas (715) wrote:

carnal truth / romance muddled
On Friday, February 18, 2005, KittyStryker (710) wrote:

beauty. like the flash of an ankle in victorian porn.
On Friday, February 18, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917) wrote:

i agree with Kendra...this is very interesting..
On Friday, February 18, 2005, ardneK (72) wrote:

O.o interesting...the title seems longer than the write...interesting - >|