misses Saturday night

By Devil lyn

she closed the        gap
on their
relationship
 
at the bottom of a bourbon glass
with a 6 pack
of blue ribbon Pabst
and
a toothbrush
once belonging
to johnny cash

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Copyright 2022 Devil lyn
Published on Thursday, March 31, 2022.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Friday, April 1, 2022, carlosjackal (2827)By person wrote:

    Ooh..What a gem..Those last 3 lines sent this into orbit :)

  • carlosjackal On Friday, May 19, 2023, carlosjackal (2827)By person wrote:

    Still love this. *shakes fist at the rest of DP for failing to comment on / bookmark this succinct little gem* Goddamn bell ends!!

  • Devil lyn On Friday, April 1, 2022, Devil lyn (345)By person wrote:

    Gotta love Johnny Cash! ... Thanks, Carlos;)

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