Black Spaghetti
By Carmina Gitana
Determined to create something
sophisticated and exotic
and adult,
we filled the kitchen
with dirty pots
and dirty jokes,
with the sharp, strong scent of spices,
and the sharp, strong sense of intimacy
of the sort that can only live
in the kitchen.
We chopped onions
and managed not to cry,
and shared tomato sauce-smeared kisses,
and licked olive oil
(extra virgin)
off one another's fingers.
Later, tasting
the fruits of our rambunctious labors,
we could not stop smiling,
the night sliding away
between our lips
like black spaghetti.
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Copyright 2005 Carmina Gitana
Published on Monday, February 28, 2005.
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On Monday, May 22, 2023, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
A wonderful scene painted so very well. A fave.
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On Saturday, March 31, 2018, Jeangrim
(7) wrote:
Food erotica - delicious!
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On Sunday, April 8, 2007, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
Mmm... very sensory. I could taste it and smell it and feel it and see it... and even hear it. Very seductive and sweet.
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On Tuesday, March 14, 2006, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Fantastic imagery! Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
Sweet writing, very erotic and tactile
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On Sunday, June 19, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
erotic, enchanting and just the right lenght. -kitty
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On Friday, March 18, 2005, steuss
(92) wrote:
You do have an incredibly talent at conjuring images in your reader's minds. This was touching with its sincerity and honesty, glee and joy. So very well done! I love your alliteration.
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On Thursday, March 10, 2005, -Oz-
(131) wrote:
'delicious' -Oz
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On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
completely excellent, evocative, beautifully crafted write. I agree with Brenya's comment. Fantastic piece.
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On Tuesday, March 1, 2005, Anth
(1126) wrote:
its great toi come to your works for something fresh and original, i utterly loved the ending
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A former member wrote:
for me food and love often go hand-in-hand. nice write! ....-samone
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On Monday, February 28, 2005, blue
(1409) wrote:
Oh! Carmina, this was just....simply fantastic! Superb write!!! ..yes indeed...~b
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A former member wrote:
I love the way you play with my senses. Another wonderful work. I like your style a lot. Consider yourself faved.
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On Monday, February 28, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
sexy...'and licked olive oil (extra virgin) off one another's fingers...'hmmmm....i can taste this sensuality...
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A former member wrote:
hahaha, it's sweet, and cute, and yet... deep and dark, Really like it :)
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On Monday, February 28, 2005, A Broken Soul
(80) wrote:
almost disturbing... almost seductive, but deffinetly awesome! i love the title, it's very catchy. ^Autumn^
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On Monday, February 28, 2005, MightofNight
(10) wrote:
Awesome. Love the imagery and tone. Brings old memories back into vivid focus. :-D
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A former member wrote:
Mmmmm, this tickles me inside and tantalizes the part of my brain that translates poetry into feelings.
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On Monday, February 28, 2005, stormtalk
(727) wrote:
Flawlessly lovely.
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On Monday, February 28, 2005, Dei
(663) wrote:
Awww. this is very sweet. i know this feeling. of cooking up a meal with romance on the side. lovely
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On Monday, February 28, 2005, Elise
(187) wrote:
Interesting title, it made me wanna read. I'm glad I did..the romance of cooking together, eating together, and such..nice work ^_^
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On Monday, February 28, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
damn, i like this...and the title just kicks!