Musing

By Stranger

Watching you
through a pane of glass
A 1000 miles within it,
a 1000 miles between us

Your beauty digs a stiletto heel
down into my tongue
until I am unable to whisper
or scream

I write your name upon my palm,
and with outstretched fingers
press it against
the wall of distance between us

You reach your arm out towards mine,
as if gazing into a mirror
We stare at each other
becoming frozen images

Photographs
hanging side by side in a gallery
Passersby
pondering the mystery in our eyes

“I think these two
represent what might have been.”
“No, see the names on their hands?
They are two halves of a whole.”

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© 2007 Stranger
Published on Sunday, March 18, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • tonebone On Wednesday, May 13, 2020, tonebone (48)By person wrote:

    ive only read a few of your pieces and im already very impressed with the content, familiarity and thought that has gone into your work... thank you.

  • Aurora_Light On Saturday, March 24, 2007, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    "They are two halves of a whole" a perfect ending for this work welcome back by the way

  • Sin On Monday, March 19, 2007, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    this was well worth the wait...your writes never disappoint..and those last two lines declared this a knockout, bravo ~kristy

  • Mylissa On Monday, March 19, 2007, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    This aches in my heart. stunning.

  • elisa On Monday, March 19, 2007, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    a perfect touch ...... of exact similarity...well said.

  • Carmina Gitana On Monday, March 19, 2007, Carmina Gitana (149)By person wrote:

    Welcome back, Stranger :) Your images are as fresh and alive as ever, and your language as exquisite as always. Thank you for the experience of reading this tonight.

  • A former member wrote: Such an oh so perfect ending. Loved it

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