R.E.A.L.

By Stranger

You awaken at night
In the garden of our Lord and Lady

As you rise, you hear the music
Of violins and flutes vibrating off of
The leaves and flowers that surround you

You realize that you have forgotten your name
You look down in the moonlight
At the robe covering your bare skin
It is red and gold, the colors of royalty
You think: perhaps I am a princess

A breeze carrying the scent of lilies takes you by the hand
And walks you through the foliage
To the edge of a lake
That is as vast and motionless
As a mountain that has melted

You look down at your reflection
And see me standing behind you
You turn to look
But there is only the fragrance of lilies

You look back at my image trapped beneath the stillness
Our eyes meet
My gaze becomes a vine encircling your ankle

The voice of my breath whispers in your ear:
"Come into the lake
Where my words will have lips
And my love can know the ache of flesh"

You let your robe fall to the ground
Your body is the color of olives ripening

Naked, you feel a chill that causes
Your elbows and your knees to pull towards each other

You feel the vine moving up the inside of your thigh
A heartbeat begins to throb in your toes
It rises up through the bones in your legs
And guides the vine inside you

Adrenaline loosening its entrance
It swells as it fills you
Causing your muscles to bloom with heat
And your balance to fail
You let go of the ground, letting yourself fall

But more vines wrap around your limbs and your torso
And lower you, like strong arms, into the lake

Touching its surface
You shudder as if from water that is too cold
Or unclean
But it is warm
And it passes through you like sunlight
As you dissolve into me

***

When you wake
It is day
You are wearing peasants clothes

You remember your name
And our Lord's and Lady's
And mine

You return to the work of tending the garden
And smile
Because you know that it was real

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Copyright 2003 Stranger
Published on Monday, August 25, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • tonebone On Wednesday, May 13, 2020, tonebone (51)By person wrote:

    this is really an awesome piece also. you have the ability to step outside yourself and create something completely outside your realm, or perhaps it's completely within.

  • Aurora_Light On Tuesday, July 1, 2008, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    I thought this was a masterpeice when i read it the very first time and my opinion has not changed in the past 5 years. the imagery is great and leaves just enough to the imagination, I miss you

  • Mistress Morbid On Tuesday, March 2, 2004, Mistress Morbid (405)By person wrote:

    My heart is pounding too fast to say much....wow...

  • blackdarkness On Friday, November 21, 2003, blackdarkness (228)By person wrote:

    I cant belive i didnt read this yet!!! I love it.....

  • UnsilentMajority On Thursday, November 20, 2003, UnsilentMajority (19)By person wrote:

    it flows good it sounds good its great i like it you should try short stories...

  • OLd SouL On Thursday, September 11, 2003, OLd SouL (734)By person wrote:

    thanks for the trip. forgot where I was for a minute, which was very refreshing.

  • A former member wrote: Guess who :)

  • Blinded_Tiger On Tuesday, September 2, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    It is great to see such artistic work here. I admire your perspective, as I do your imagination(Is it the same?). Tiger

  • maddin foxxxy On Friday, August 29, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358)By person wrote:

    This is by farthest the greatest taste of fantasy and reality in a wonderful written work....I found myself there...without being woken from the loveliest of dreams..very nicely done.

  • Aurora_Light On Friday, August 29, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    a tale i wish i could live but it is so far from my reach, great write i loved it

  • The Fallen Angel On Wednesday, August 27, 2003, The Fallen Angel (235)By person wrote:

    A lovely tale +Fallen One+

  • A Velvet Tongue On Monday, August 25, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    I am breathless and spent on the beautiful visions and silken words that have filled me whilst reading this..you have stolen my breath this eve, and I can only repay you by adding you to the list! I am utterly moved!!

  • SnowQueen On Monday, August 25, 2003, SnowQueen (59)By person wrote:

    wow... this poem hypnotized me right from the beginning. I truly love this... It left me feeling like I’d tasted perfection and my mind is longing for more Stranger, never stop writing, I look forward to every piece you write.

  • urbanhumility On Monday, August 25, 2003, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    the essence of nature bound with "the"sexual nature,somthing different but i like. you speak of what the subconcious might "seam" together while making love, you have done well my friend........urban

  • Jonas On Monday, August 25, 2003, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    drowning dying slipping sliding some fantastic fantasy, some dream come and gone though not lost... love or lust? ... nice touch with the tentacles by the by... very hentai, me like.

  • anathema On Monday, August 25, 2003, anathema (50)By person wrote:

    ::giggles:: i was just watching La Blue Girl... and i thought of tentacles too... but this is pretty, more pagan, more magical... this isn't porn, this is the eroticism in the scent of fresh earth and trickling rain... the sensuality in nature...

  • Dancing_Monkey On Monday, August 25, 2003, Dancing_Monkey (1246)By person wrote:

    really good.. im deeply impressed.. Monkey

  • hate_doll On Monday, August 25, 2003, hate_doll (265)By person wrote:

    amazing flow...truly loverly...I think she'll get the message...hee hee...read perfectly...you're not one my favorites for nothing! ;)

  • Six-Out On Monday, August 25, 2003, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    I'm sure whoever this is written to will get the message loud and clear. Great write stranger, I love it.

  • SalemLex On Monday, August 25, 2003, SalemLex (25)By person wrote:

    Beautiful poem. It flows wonderfully and you use your words in the best ways possible. Truely great imagery.

  • A former member wrote: my words exactly, very lovely

  • _Andrew_ On Monday, August 25, 2003, _Andrew_ (245)By person wrote:

    materful write, i only didnt like how so many emotions were bunched up so tightly, reminded me of living in london england :P, don't get me wrong, this piece was beautiful, i just felt that some emotion was lost in this which makes me envious *~*aNDReW*~*

  • Abbyernathie On Monday, August 25, 2003, Abbyernathie (61)By person wrote:

    that is an awesome poem. it has great flow. great write

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