Carmine Portrait

By MsDemise

 Just Picture this
your answer why
your violent rays touched my amber skies
A bloodshot face of what used to be
What had left earth?
what had left me?
Redish lies to perk up the daze
I lie in this thrown of a selfish haze
A strong scent of this dishonest fuck
whit thoughts of another to arouse the love.

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Copyright 2012 MsDemise
Published on Thursday, January 12, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Monday, February 19, 2024, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    A fave. Little turns in the phrasing and rhyme made this for me.

  • A former member wrote: i wonder sometimes, fucking someone while thinking of another. well said though

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