Aiglatson Detrevni

By lupus tenebrae

 



Music-
melodious, always
nostalgia inverted
like counterclockwise
poetry in repetition, as
compulsive as arrangements
made ready, in minutes of men,
mousy and humble
mastery over broken keys
~Piano~
Keys broken over mastery,
humble and mousy,
men of minutes in ready made
arrangements as compulsive 
as repetition in poetry,
counterclockwise like
inverted nostalgia
always, melodious
music.   

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Copyright 2012 lupus tenebrae
Published on Thursday, March 15, 2012.     Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Nostalgia defies direction, through time's passage, it remains unchanged and constant. Despite the gimmicky title, this is my attempt on palindrome.
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  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, September 12, 2023, carlosjackal (3015)By person wrote:

    Perfect inversions.

  • blue On Friday, April 15, 2016, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    ...the quickly increasing momentum of rediscovery... This is blood work. ~b

  • blue On Saturday, March 31, 2012, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    I am so taken with this poem..... truly. ~b

  • blue On Monday, March 19, 2012, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    I have read this a dozen times now, at least... I can only smile.... smile, and let it do it's work in me.... a genius perfection is at play here.... ~b

  • blue On Friday, March 16, 2012, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    I am truly awestruck. You are quickly gaining momentum with me.... ~b

  • Poetic-Realm On Thursday, March 15, 2012, Poetic-Realm (258)By person wrote:

    Clever, I like this though it seems like it would be rather difficult to write in such a way. Id like to see more of this style from you.

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