Aiglatson Detrevni

By lupus tenebrae

Music-
melodious, always
nostalgia inverted
like counterclockwise
poetry in repetition, as
compulsive as arrangements
made ready, in minutes of men,
mousy and humble
mastery over broken keys
~Piano~
Keys broken over mastery,
humble and mousy,
men of minutes in ready made
arrangements as compulsive
as repetition in poetry,
counterclockwise like
inverted nostalgia
always, melodious
music.

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Published on Thursday, March 15, 2012. Filed under: "Structured" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Nostalgia defies direction, through time's passage, it remains unchanged and constant. Despite the gimmicky title, this is my attempt on palindrome.

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Comments on "Aiglatson Detrevni"

On Tuesday, September 12, 2023, carlosjackal (2788) wrote:

Perfect inversions.
On Friday, April 15, 2016, blue (1409) wrote:

...the quickly increasing momentum of rediscovery... This is blood work. ~b
On Saturday, March 31, 2012, blue (1409) wrote:

I am so taken with this poem..... truly. ~b
On Monday, March 19, 2012, blue (1409) wrote:

I have read this a dozen times now, at least... I can only smile.... smile, and let it do it's work in me.... a genius perfection is at play here.... ~b
On Friday, March 16, 2012, blue (1409) wrote:

I am truly awestruck. You are quickly gaining momentum with me.... ~b
On Thursday, March 15, 2012, Poetic-Realm (253) wrote:

Clever, I like this though it seems like it would be rather difficult to write in such a way. Id like to see more of this style from you.