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brass and bruises
By eidos
I once bathed in your elegance.
until you wrote poems with those fingers
the way Miles Davis slammed those keys.
and I felt the need to tell you,
that your life is much more than a few notes
that no one fully appreciated
anyway.
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Copyright 2012 eidos
Published on Monday, August 27, 2012.
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On Tuesday, April 4, 2023, carlosjackal
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wrote:
7 lines and a title of pure brilliance.
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On Tuesday, November 6, 2012, Strataic
(100) wrote:
Wow, Sweet inked words to the paper, Saving someone from themselves almost, I felt. thanks.
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A former member wrote:
i think im in love with you.
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On Tuesday, August 28, 2012, Devilish
(2658) wrote:
Damn.. Touch me in the places that come together. hello there and welcome ..
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On Tuesday, August 28, 2012, Zhee
(529) wrote:
simple and poignant... nicely done..
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On Monday, August 27, 2012, Alchemist
(688) wrote:
I like the depth with your to the point imagery. Welcome to the Valley.
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On Monday, August 27, 2012, dwells
(4285) wrote:
LOving the metaphor and well done!
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On Monday, August 27, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(303) wrote:
This is beautiful. With my minimal attention span I love short poems that contain depths. I read adoration, regret, loss and pain between the lines of this and it was beautifully captured.
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