dirty girl on a siren night

By ebonyamore

through the crack between the headboard and the matress i can see

the random assortment of castaways, relegated to the bedroom floor in a careless daze

as we tumble.
condom wrappers, shucked off their contents frenziedly.
there's that earring i've been looking for for weeks now...

the empty jar that used to hold cherries. you sucked three of them from within me that night--
taking your turn
after i, in my turn, drizzled the shocking pink juice over your balls, licking it slowly as i watched you go rigid..in more ways than one.

your hands became claws, gripping the sheet. a groan, half muffled to my ears with my head firmly buried between your thighs even as i sat on your chest... intuition telling me you were staring at the growing stain on my white cotton panties, dirtying them with your indecent thoughts alone. hearing you sigh as i feasted....

sucking, straining for my sweet reward. flicking my tongue over the tip expectantly, the way i watch you do on a hot summer day, ice cream cone in hand, savoring each creamy drop that inevitably melts its way through the bottom of the cone. lick by imperceptible lick until the cone is spent, flaccid for its emptiness, but still sticky and smelling of the sweet contents it just released.

and tonight...watching you smolder with your cigarette in hand...i knew as surely as i always do that i would pay for this argument. somehow i never mind when it comes time to settle the bill. you crash into me and i crash into the headboard, howling in exhileration and savage execution. i glance over my shoulder and watch your face, contorted in ecstacy and the spent casings of fury.

god i love fighting with you. the grudge fuck apology and absolution are my drug.

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© 2009 ebonyamore
Published on Thursday, April 9, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Sunday, September 10, 2023, carlosjackal (2786)By person wrote:

    Fantastically hot and so well described.

  • A former member wrote: Ha. I loved it. Real. I’m still laughing.

  • Miztaken4beauty On Tuesday, April 13, 2010, Miztaken4beauty (176)By person wrote:

    ::Oh, my, what a night....

  • ANGELSLAYER On Friday, April 9, 2010, ANGELSLAYER (117)By person wrote:

    Goddamn I love the way you work! awwww......... now I'm horny

  • ALBATROSS On Thursday, April 30, 2009, ALBATROSS (194)By person wrote:

    There's too many lines that I loved to even begin to list here. You are a master of erotic poetry.

  • MESUN On Thursday, April 23, 2009, MESUN (230)By person wrote:

    .....(trying to collect my thoughts)......i got nothing. i'm just awash with silence. that made me feel like i needed cigarette. yet again, sinfully beautiful. good recommendation.

  • A former member wrote: damn... you just filled my cone with cream. flaccid my ass, Sexilicious....mmmmhmmmm. love the power exploding all through this. you keep developing metaphors like that one icy hottt one above, and I'll have to consider an upgrade just to get a bookmark.... I can hear the siren howl

  • A former member wrote: the closest thing to perfect. I would say perfect but I don't believe anything can really be perfect. This explains things with such brilliance, I couldn't have done this better,or even as good as far as im concerned.

  • A former member wrote: i really do enjoy decisive wording and raw malice amongst wax and ice, a blend of fuck that relies on nothing but the will of participants,...you've grasped the mood to suit the sadistic in all of us,... well p.layed miss.

  • whisperer On Friday, April 10, 2009, whisperer (166)By person wrote:

    ha HA nice nice nice, anger, sex and intuition, my 3 favorite things

  • ebonyamore On Friday, April 10, 2009, ebonyamore (100)By person wrote:

    *laughs* mine too. throw in a nice bottle of absinthe and a handful of cigarettes and you've got yourself a party *grins naughtily*

  • A former member wrote: very hot... hope to read more like this from you.

  • A former member wrote: let me be the first [on this post at least] to say....you are good. and secondly, that closing couplet...hell that closing couplet, coupling......[sigh].. .. is so spot on and grindingly good......nearly visceral in its voyeurism here. . .. . this is dark. and torn,. . .. gritted and gripping

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