but not softly

By disposable

hold me
but not softly
squeeze me with arms
that aren't a lie
until i'm mere bones
rattling in your chest

kiss me
but not softly
press those lips so close to mine
that promise of a new day exists
and then meet me in my eyes

touch me
but not softly
burn your fingerprints
into my flesh
until the flames of hell
seem a welcoming breeze

lie with me
but not softly
consume me whole
eat my moon
and swallow my stars if u wish

just love me hard

hard-

but please...

do not do it softly

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Published on Saturday, April 18, 2009. Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Awards

December 15th, 2012

Comments on "but not softly"

A former member wrote: In a word: delicious. This is the kind of poem that sends shivers down my spine. I wish I could bookmark this already!
On Saturday, December 15, 2012, M Morgan (198) wrote:

Oh yeah! Not softly but hard and with strenght that is so good. Fantastic and i love it.
A former member wrote: yesssssssssss!
On Saturday, December 15, 2012, Stephanie Sideways (276) wrote:

Desire and lust expressed incredibly cleverly. This piece is unusual, unique and makes you want to read it several times.... ( and I did)
On Saturday, December 15, 2012, PoetessDarkly (693) wrote:

wow, totally awed by this masterpiece.
On Saturday, November 7, 2009, Qurious (40) wrote:

I'm totally with ebonyamore on this one. Awesome.
On Sunday, April 19, 2009, ebonyamore (100) wrote:

my god but that's sexy. and i so know those feelings but the way you phrased them...*shivers* heeellll yes. more please...
On Sunday, April 19, 2009, Alanarchy (1168) wrote:

"consume me whole / eat my moon / and swallow my stars if u wish" I don't think I've ever read anything like that bit. Very unique, and quite beautiful. Write it harder, daddy. Cool stuff.
A former member wrote: hard enough to FEEL it...yes.
On Sunday, April 19, 2009, AniDayz (812) wrote:

rapturous. i dig it. dig it ...deeply