That day in the rain.

By boneplate

show me you love me….

she begged through the rain….

with a guilty hand and

 a fools heart.


I turned away.

 

awakened.

from a Carolish dream.

a new heart. beating

with new colors.

 

only to find

the winter winds.

had carried her away.

to another.

 

now I am living.

 

someone else’s life.

in someone else’s skin..

longing to be her pillow...

searching for her favorite line....

 

Show me you love me…

I beg through the rain………..



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Copyright 2010 boneplate
Published on Monday, February 8, 2010.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • Salty Ships On Monday, August 26, 2013, Salty Ships (31)By person wrote:

    This wasn't overly complicated yet it relayed an intricate set of emotions. I enjoyed this very much.

  • A Life Without You On Friday, April 16, 2010, A Life Without You (146)By person wrote:

    amazing, i love it... its as if you wrote a chapter of my life in a few short paragraphs... emotions in a whirl wind...

  • A former member wrote: this is sad and beautiful. wonderfully written

  • Dilated View On Tuesday, February 9, 2010, Dilated View (583)By person wrote:

    This read with longing. The last 6 lines were honest and wrapped this up nicely. Interesting read.

  • A former member wrote: simple and beautiful Good write

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