That day in the rain.

show me you love me….

she begged through the rain….

with a guilty hand and

a fools heart.

I turned away.

awakened.

from a Carolish dream.

a new heart. beating

with new colors.

only to find

the winter winds.

had carried her away.

to another.

now I am living.

someone else’s life.

in someone else’s skin..

longing to be her pillow...

searching for her favorite line....

Show me you love me…

I beg through the rain………..

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Published on Monday, February 8, 2010. Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"

Comments on "That day in the rain."

On Monday, August 26, 2013, Salty Ships (30) wrote:

This wasn't overly complicated yet it relayed an intricate set of emotions. I enjoyed this very much.
On Friday, April 16, 2010, A Life Without You (146) wrote:

amazing, i love it... its as if you wrote a chapter of my life in a few short paragraphs... emotions in a whirl wind...
A former member wrote: this is sad and beautiful. wonderfully written
On Tuesday, February 9, 2010, Dilated View (582) wrote:

This read with longing. The last 6 lines were honest and wrapped this up nicely. Interesting read.
A former member wrote: simple and beautiful Good write