write me a love song
By ebonyamore
tell me the secrets that i see hidden in your eyes...
the whispered
fears you keep locked from the world
and i will sing you a lullabye
a symphony of love and goofy laughter, corny jokes and awkward soothing
until your smile lights the world again.
write me a sonnet
tell me the wherefores and the whens and the hows.
fill it with
explanations to my mysteries...why it had to be us, duo contra mundum.
and I will paint you a story with our bed as the canvas.
I will
wrap you up in me,a mural of arms and legs holding you tight, of hair fanned
across your chest
and fingernails painting the sunset in soft strokes
brushed along your spine
build me a cathedral.
let your
arms be my sanctuary, your eyes my confessional,
your heart where
I worship and my name sighed from your lips my absolution
and I will
fill it with treasures just for you.
the emeralds that sparkle in
my eyes when you laugh just for me
the rubies that flush on my cheeks
when you give me that look.
sing me a love song, my love
and let my heart,
that beats for you
be all the rhythm it
needs
Comments on "write me a love song"
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A former member wrote:
Beautifully written.
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On Sunday, January 27, 2019, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Passion, love, sincerity. All packed into a write that feels like a private moment being shared with the love of your life.
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A former member wrote:
Such devotion and unity... Is that even possible between two human beings? It sounds supernatural!
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On Thursday, February 3, 2011, boneplate
(56) wrote:
'build me a cathedral. let your arms be my sanctuary, your eyes my confessional,' ....beautiful write, great images....a great place to be........
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A former member wrote:
Monumental work... undying intimacy, soft spoken and dreamy, melodiously naked and delving beauty... a real treasure of a piece. Thank you for sharing this.
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A former member wrote:
mi querida, esta es hermosa. dos contra el mundo... me gusta tu Latina. The wherefores and when and hows... such mysteries inexplicable... like the love that flows through fantasy.... such purity the world always shuns... could only exist in a song sung in the treasures of you voice. *bows before the altar of mi amore*
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A former member wrote:
I loved it!!! ~ hdb.