Breakfast with ebony
By Musik2MyEyes
Four members online...one hidden
from view
Thought I'd venture a chat...maybe this was my cue.
Just something simple...throw out a line
See if who's hidden...is
my occasional find.
Went off to read...kept an eye on the chat
When words did appear...like the purr of a cat.
We had a nice
talk...even coffee she made
Giggles and blushes...hate some moments
to fade.
Sweet java and more...a bagel she did offer
What
a pleasant surprise...I stuffed in my coffer.
The breakfast
was filling...with words I found tasty
Hated to leave...but my exit
was hasty.
Brief...unexpected...a meeting of chance
Started
my day...like good music to dance.
In my opinion...she's class...not
an act
Well versed...not rehearsed...gift of tact.
I enjoyed
having breakfast...just us girls, no signore
True delight, ray of
light...Ebonyamore...
A rare fiore.
(See
Author's note)
Author's Note:
The "usual find" is Ainsof in the morning. I doubt if I go into the chat any more often than I did before...but I enjoyed those few minutes. Just wanted her to know brief encounters leave lasting impressions =)Awards
Comments on "Breakfast with ebony"
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A former member wrote:
hmmm where did my occasional find flee to, anyway? Hope you are well, and enjoying your morning coffee, as always... :D
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On Thursday, December 9, 2010, Meadowhawk
(160) wrote:
Well thought. Well written. An enjoyable piece.
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A former member wrote:
Oh where have you gone, my dear? Ms POTD winner.... my morning coffee is all the blacker without your sweetness...........
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A former member wrote:
Loved it... well done and thanks for sharing... wish I would have had "breakfast" with you too! :)
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On Saturday, April 10, 2010, A Life Without You
(146) wrote:
Talent I tell you, ...talent. Very clever indeed! Just keep me in mind for next time, I've been known to make a pretty mean eggs Benedict...
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On Sunday, April 11, 2010, ebonyamore
(100) wrote:
'k...I vote he makes breakfast next time. But I'll still make the coffee. *smiles*
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On Tuesday, April 6, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Another great write M, the beginning was so perfect... every time I log in I see that... pure genius, way to be different.... Thank-you so much for this write...
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A former member wrote:
Aw! I missed having breakfast with the two of you?! damn. And bagels!? Clearly my loss. I'm sure my day would have been much better after a breakfast with you. Love the poem, very sweet :)
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On Monday, April 5, 2010, ebonyamore
(100) wrote:
that's twice in one day you've left me nearly speechless. this was utterly unexpected and so very lovely. the charm of your words is surpassed only by the grace of the author and I feel awed at such a tribute. Thank you so very much!