waves.
By Six-Out
the beach.
it doesn't scream
peace-
at me like it used to.
and it's fitting
that the stars stopped falling
from the clouds.
when I decided to
seek them
tonight.
but words.
they taste bitter
so I choose not to speak.
and ink.
it's become tiresome.
so I've grown
bored- with thinking.
and here.
now.
I think
it's time to sleep.
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Copyright 2010 Six-Out
Published on Friday, January 29, 2010.
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On Thursday, April 5, 2018, sIo
(898) wrote:
.....I seriously want to say how this makes me feel but I can’t find the words. Like an old dog coming out of the rain and just finding now solace in the comfort of shelter.
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On Thursday, May 20, 2010, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
this is perfect... just the way it is and how it moves. it speaks volumes quietly... and fits my mood right about now too...
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A former member wrote:
short ,bittersweet and to the point , i love it ! thank you for sharing. peace
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On Monday, February 22, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(192) wrote:
Even when your writing depicts you are having issues writing...the writing deserves praise. This is a fav...it speaks to me more than just writing...I have days where life itself is like this. My problem is sleep is not my answer...dammit.
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A former member wrote:
haha.... it started out so strongly... but I guess sleep took over? I don't know if I should read this seriously or not.... haha, nice.
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On Sunday, January 31, 2010, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
pretty much. I figured it was best to end it with the night. no use going back to what's done.
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On Friday, January 29, 2010, Dilated View
(582) wrote:
Sometimes when your mind goes all blah and the thought cycles don't flow in a way that is conducive to figuring shit out sleep is the best way to recharge. This was serene and sad but enjoyed.
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On Friday, January 29, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Nicely done, it has great flow and is well spoken (written).
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On Friday, January 29, 2010, theXkevorkian
(64) wrote:
Rest now ...... Everything will be better in the morning ... I myself have been here oh so many times ..... Write On :)
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A former member wrote:
Very calming.