Fuck you. (an ode to love)

By stuart_pid

Fuck you
for what you do.
For all the pain you put me through.
For every ounce of energy
pretending we were meant to be.
For every wasted day
awaiting changes with despondency.
For endless days
and restless nights.
For long and loud obnoxious fights.
For all you say.
Your wicked ways.
For twisted games you make me play.
For dirty secrets,
silent treatments.
Every known, exploited weakness.
All the lies
and useless cries.
The frigid look behind your eyes.
The rage inside
I couldn't hide.
I swear to god I really tried.
But still I love you
tried and true.
From inside, outside,
through and through.
I don't know why but this I do,
I always will
so fuck me too.

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Copyright 2004 Ken Ashby
Published on Friday, September 10, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Cattarax On Thursday, January 19, 2012, Cattarax (218)By person wrote:

    This has been on my faves list for a long time now and still I agree with every single word!! Thank you for leaving it here!!

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, January 3, 2012, FadedBlues (2961)By person wrote:

    I always liked this one...enticing beginning...the perfect ending... bitter, but a pleasure to read. (and the hidden message in your name: without art, all that's left is stupid.)

  • Ashteroth On Tuesday, February 22, 2011, Ashteroth (214)By person wrote:

    Lol I had to come back and read this again... I love it :) I'm gonna show some of my friends this piece ~Ash

  • SulaMoon On Tuesday, January 11, 2011, SulaMoon (95)By person wrote:

    WOW!!!! I couldn't have said it better myself! I have to bookmark this one! Thank you :)

  • A former member wrote: this is exactly where i am in life right now. Thanks for putting this into words.

  • Ashteroth On Sunday, September 26, 2010, Ashteroth (214)By person wrote:

    That was really enjoyable to read and I think u have captured this sentiment just perfectly :) Thaks for the read ~Ash

  • disfunctionalak On Sunday, May 2, 2010, disfunctionalak (67)By person wrote:

    This is fucking awesome!!!! Definately a favorite of mine... Write on!!! ;)

  • Miztaken4beauty On Thursday, April 8, 2010, Miztaken4beauty (205)By person wrote:

    This Is AMAZING. The flow drags you in and makes you love it all the more.

  • idiosyncratic On Tuesday, April 6, 2010, idiosyncratic (131)By person wrote:

    i have no words to explain the extent of awesome reached by this poem. it moved me

  • scarletara On Tuesday, March 23, 2010, scarletara (62)By person wrote:

    Love! Love! Love! Excellent read! Perfect ending! Totally applies to my life as well... so fuck me, too.

  • Musik2MyEyes On Sunday, March 14, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (222)By person wrote:

    The perfect poem. Well deserving of the poem of the Day it received. We really have no one but ourselves to blame...now do we? Damn the heart blinded by emotion!! And fuck me too.

  • punk mc cool On Saturday, March 13, 2010, punk mc cool (79)By person wrote:

    waoh bro great write.........loved it :D

  • A former member wrote: very well structured, every sentence hits you like a punch in the face, and a great way to finish.

  • This is my Curse On Saturday, March 13, 2010, This is my Curse (8)By person wrote:

    ahh so amazing and sad and angering. i love it.

  • A former member wrote: Nice work! Straight up and deep. Well thought out and yes i can relate to it myself. I like the ending it displays honesty.

  • Rowan On Saturday, March 13, 2010, Rowan (294)By person wrote:

    This is brilliant!

  • DK6_Marius On Saturday, March 13, 2010, DK6_Marius (308)By person wrote:

    Hmm, yeah, I pretty much have to agree with the rest of them on this one it's great. I really liked the first ten lines, they seem to hit the spot in my heart where memories occur, the instability of Love. I give it a Ten. Scholar

  • A former member wrote: Oh my God. This poem was EPIC. Its clever and the flow was wonderful. Awesome write. Scholar

  • DoctorAsh On Sunday, September 23, 2007, DoctorAsh (389)By person wrote:

    Ahh, the great tale of consequence .. standing upon the teeder-todder of emotion, where the reward of happiness slightly out-wieghs the outcome of saddness. From this - is where a sliver of love is kept. Tremendous write. Daniel

  • Jaded Ireland On Tuesday, June 20, 2006, Jaded Ireland (26)By person wrote:

    This was a really good write and I can relate.

  • Chimauron On Monday, March 27, 2006, Chimauron (89)By person wrote:

    See, I wonder why I can't say it this way... but no, I have to be all artsy with it. There is an undeniable element of rage in your work. Very nice.

  • A former member wrote: Damn man the flow in this was incredible. I know these feelings well. Very awsome write. ~Ship!

  • Elegant Kiss On Wednesday, November 9, 2005, Elegant Kiss (212)By person wrote:

    'I swear to god I really tried.'... I miss you, Ken. I miss you like woah.

  • AniDayz On Monday, April 25, 2005, AniDayz (822)By person wrote:

    ahhh...fucking rockin'...flows all in and out...remarkable[!]

  • blue On Thursday, December 30, 2004, blue (1454)By person wrote:

    lol...I loved it! great ending too...~b

  • A former member wrote: Damn. I know how you feel, I went through that not too long ago. I'm deffinately adding this to my favorites.

  • A former member wrote: This had such a bitter feel to it that I find very familiar and I can completely relate to the ending. Awsome write:p ~Ship!

  • Lotophagi On Sunday, November 14, 2004, Lotophagi (341)By person wrote:

    This is awesome, I love the rhythm and the power in it, it reads like a frantic list in my mind, angry and demanding, but at the same time almost seeking and begging..... excellent write. Thank you.

  • AbjectColloquialist On Thursday, September 23, 2004, AbjectColloquialist (33)By person wrote:

    Bing! She got served, yo! Good stuff.

  • Dayer On Thursday, September 16, 2004, Dayer (165)By person wrote:

    I liked this!

  • Jonas On Wednesday, September 15, 2004, Jonas (767)By person wrote:

    i bet you're a pumpkins fan, huh?

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