Blue

By lordshadow

I wrote her name on a cheap restaurant napkin
encircled it with a perfect heart...
I held it out in front of me with my left hand,
and with my right, I flicked the rigid wheel
that scraped up against the hard flint, igniting
the tiniest of flames.

Left hand met right and I watched that pathetic
symbol (representing nothing of what she truly meant
to me) go up in a glorious display of oranges, yellows,
and at the heart... blue. Although the display never
let on to her importance, it did however summarize
my emotions: blue at the heart. It's strange
how blue can be both so cold and so hot.

I watched as that sorry sanitary cloth
ate itself and transformed to an unidentifiable
collage of black and almost-brown... and I recall thinking
to myself how appropriate those colors were.

It was then that I realized that there is a time, however, that blue can be both hot and cold in the same moment.

Because inside, a fire rages that is slowly engulfing my
ability to feel, my desire to love, and my will
to live. A fire that burns so incredibly hot,
yet in the end, leaves me feeling nothing but cold.

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Copyright 2004 lordshadow
Published on Thursday, August 19, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Friday, May 8, 2009, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    A truly great piece of art. Absolutely searing and beautiful :) -Carl

  • TaintedButterfly On Tuesday, February 24, 2009, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    Damn beautiful and just pulls all of my heartstrings, still!

  • TaintedButterfly On Friday, November 3, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    I hit "View random work", and I have this candle lit & was looking directly at the "blue" & BAM! this poem popped up on my screen!!! ummm.........WOW!!!! I think I just fainted!!!!

  • TaintedButterfly On Friday, November 3, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    I am not kidding at all. That just blew my mind. I love synchronicity! I didn't even realize I was feeling blue, and your poem had my tears falling without control...

  • TaintedButterfly On Friday, November 3, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    Kind of caught me off guard for a sec. I must say an awesome write with tragic wounds healed by the burning of an "old flame" so to speak! New fave! Thanks!

  • A former member wrote: awesome write. Good technique with the symbol driven metaphor of colour, excellent creative idea, I really enjoyed this, thank you.

  • capt_funguy On Friday, August 5, 2005, capt_funguy (777)By person wrote:

    the strain and pain that goes along with wishing for closure , and distance ... yet caught up mesmerized in the life of every moment ... this was excellent .. funguy

  • A former member wrote: 'I wrote her name on a cheap restaurant napkin' Great opening line. I can feel the multitudal layers of blue you have painted in this moving poem... well done.

  • Sticky Kitty On Wednesday, July 13, 2005, Sticky Kitty (241)By person wrote:

    wonderful piece. -kitty

  • A former member wrote: I had to come back to this today. It's not a good day.. and your words made it better, love. Even through pain and hopelessness.. You comfort me. Thank you. Love you, Josh.

  • Sin On Wednesday, February 23, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    how very sad and profound, leaves me aching in the most glorious way, your words carry so much weight with them im always left in awe ~kristy

  • A former member wrote: *speechless*

  • Solace On Friday, November 19, 2004, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    Should have title this *A girl called Blue* and made it into a sad jazz/blues song...that woulda kicked ass almost as much as the poem did...just freaking awesome...wish i was a jazz musician so I could make this into a song...

  • lordshadow On Tuesday, November 23, 2004, lordshadow (153)By person wrote:

    I can play saxophone...

  • Lotophagi On Wednesday, October 27, 2004, Lotophagi (333)By person wrote:

    this leaves me softly sad, and reflective, it's wonderful.... you've laden it with symbolism and metaphors, but in such a gentle way, just telling it like it seems to be.... beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: ... *silence*

  • stuart_pid On Wednesday, September 22, 2004, stuart_pid (135)By person wrote:

    very original and well writen. i love the symbolism of the colors from the fire. ive never read anything quite like this, im going to fave it.

  • Dayer On Sunday, August 29, 2004, Dayer (162)By person wrote:

    Very interesting & a good read, nice job :)

  • Northstar On Thursday, August 19, 2004, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    interesting piece--I really like the lines "its strange/how blue can be both so cold and so hot" and the way you describe it is very original

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