...She Played Violin Beautifully...

By SluG

If you called out for me to save you,
I would drop everything in my life to.

As you cried in my neck, "I want you back,"
I choked my heartache back into my stomach.

As you whispered in my ear so beautifully,
I sobbed into your neck, "I miss you so much."

You leaving killed me, I watched you go and I cried out, I broke down, and I died.

It's not your fault that you dont like yourself,
It's my fault that I didn't try harder to show you that.

It's not your fault you needed to find yourself,
It's my fault for not letting you go sooner.

It's my fault.
It's my fault.
It's my fault.
For god sake's it's my fault.

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Copyright 2005 SluG
Published on Saturday, February 19, 2005.     Filed under: "Depressed" and "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Thursday, May 18, 2023, carlosjackal (2778)By person wrote:

    Holy shit..The heartbreak. The emotion. So fucking palpable. A fave.

  • Elegant Kiss On Thursday, September 13, 2012, Elegant Kiss (182)By person wrote:

    Yet again.. thank you.

  • Elegant Kiss On Friday, August 8, 2008, Elegant Kiss (182)By person wrote:

    I'm back, again. Thank you.

  • totaltrip On Friday, February 15, 2008, totaltrip (36)By person wrote:

    :( but I like it.

  • Elegant Kiss On Wednesday, May 10, 2006, Elegant Kiss (182)By person wrote:

    I'm back. Still in love, in case you forgot.

  • A former member wrote: I know exactly what you mean by everything is my fault

  • Elegant Kiss On Friday, July 15, 2005, Elegant Kiss (182)By person wrote:


  • Elegant Kiss On Thursday, June 23, 2005, Elegant Kiss (182)By person wrote:

    I always find myself coming back to this. As you can tell. I've told you time and time what this means to me. It still hurts to read.. Even more so now. This is the wallpaper of my heart.. and the background of my mind today. Thank you.

  • A former member wrote: I'm back. And I'm in the most horrendous mood that only this poem can help. So, hello. And thank you.

  • A former member wrote: Holy fuck, I love this. I'm never going to stop saying that.

  • A former member wrote: When we do collaborate a poem together - You have to promise to use this passion, though.:P I'm still in love with this. Have I told you Thank You?;)

  • SluG On Wednesday, April 6, 2005, SluG (35)By person wrote:

    You know what? Sounds like a deal. ~S.

  • A former member wrote: I read this several times a day.. It's affects me so hardcore it scares the shit out of me. I feel this in my heart every second of everyday. It's so personal, i feel like you ripped it out of my head.. my thoughts. If he would only listen, I would be luc

  • SluG On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, SluG (35)By person wrote:

    I receive notifications for people looking at my stuff everyday,but when you leave me notifications, I smile.I wrote what happened to me everyday with her for 3 weeks, and I just want you to know that I am always a stranger, but Your friend, S.

  • A former member wrote: I'm glad you aren't annoyed at me commenting on this same piece every day.. Haha. There's only a handful of poems on here that I go back to and read everytime I logon.

  • A former member wrote: This one is always the first. It's so honest and real.. and.. it's just the current script of my heart. Thank you. I can't say it enough.

  • A former member wrote: *lucky to say what this says half as beautifully as you have expressed it.

  • A former member wrote: I came back to add this to my favourites. Thank you, again.

  • A former member wrote: Holy shit. This tore me up and knocked me on my ass. For such a short write, it packed so much pain and power.. my heart is aching and I just want to read it over and over and over because for some reason, i'm enjoying the reality of the pain. Thank you s

  • A former member wrote: *so much for sharing this. I will come back to it often. Fuck, I had to pause this comment and re-read the damn thing. The whole blaming part - it's absolutely killing me. I so need to shut up..

  • Sin On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, Sin (1168)By person wrote:

    this was dripping in pain...it hurt to read..

  • purr_verse On Saturday, February 19, 2005, purr_verse (1060)By person wrote:

    desperation, crushing; the sense of helplessness and despair in this is vivid and real. Powerful write.

  • K_Love On Saturday, February 19, 2005, K_Love (525)By person wrote:

    Heartclenching write, the pain in this is even hard to read. The title pulls the poem all together, wonderful words.

  • Carmina Gitana On Saturday, February 19, 2005, Carmina Gitana (152)By person wrote:

    The desperation and pain are so palpable here. Very emotional.

  • A former member wrote: very good emotion exspressed here ~~GOTHIC~~

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