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...She Played Violin Beautifully...
By SluG
If you called out for me to save you,
I would drop everything in my life to.
As you cried in my neck, "I want you back,"
I choked my heartache back into my stomach.
As you whispered in my ear so beautifully,
I sobbed into your neck, "I miss you so much."
You leaving killed me, I watched you go and I cried out, I broke down,
and I died.
It's not your fault that you dont like yourself,
It's my fault that I didn't try harder to show you that.
It's not your fault you needed to find yourself,
It's my fault for not letting you go sooner.
It's my fault.
It's my fault.
It's my fault.
For god sake's it's my fault.
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Copyright 2005 SluG
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On Thursday, May 18, 2023, carlosjackal
(2778)
wrote:
Holy shit..The heartbreak. The emotion. So fucking palpable. A fave.
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On Thursday, September 13, 2012, Elegant Kiss
(182) wrote:
Yet again.. thank you.
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On Friday, August 8, 2008, Elegant Kiss
(182) wrote:
I'm back, again. Thank you.
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On Friday, February 15, 2008, totaltrip
(36) wrote:
:( but I like it.
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On Wednesday, May 10, 2006, Elegant Kiss
(182) wrote:
I'm back. Still in love, in case you forgot.
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A former member wrote:
I know exactly what you mean by everything is my fault
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On Friday, July 15, 2005, Elegant Kiss
(182) wrote:
*breathesmiles*
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On Thursday, June 23, 2005, Elegant Kiss
(182) wrote:
I always find myself coming back to this. As you can tell. I've told you time and time what this means to me. It still hurts to read.. Even more so now. This is the wallpaper of my heart.. and the background of my mind today. Thank you.
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A former member wrote:
I'm back. And I'm in the most horrendous mood that only this poem can help. So, hello. And thank you.
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A former member wrote:
Holy fuck, I love this. I'm never going to stop saying that.
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A former member wrote:
When we do collaborate a poem together - You have to promise to use this passion, though.:P I'm still in love with this. Have I told you Thank You?;)
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On Wednesday, April 6, 2005, SluG
(35) wrote:
You know what? Sounds like a deal. ~S.
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A former member wrote:
I read this several times a day.. It's affects me so hardcore it scares the shit out of me. I feel this in my heart every second of everyday. It's so personal, i feel like you ripped it out of my head.. my thoughts. If he would only listen, I would be luc
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On Tuesday, March 15, 2005, SluG
(35) wrote:
I receive notifications for people looking at my stuff everyday,but when you leave me notifications, I smile.I wrote what happened to me everyday with her for 3 weeks, and I just want you to know that I am always a stranger, but Your friend, S.
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A former member wrote:
I'm glad you aren't annoyed at me commenting on this same piece every day.. Haha. There's only a handful of poems on here that I go back to and read everytime I logon.
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A former member wrote:
This one is always the first. It's so honest and real.. and.. it's just the current script of my heart. Thank you. I can't say it enough.
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A former member wrote:
*lucky to say what this says half as beautifully as you have expressed it.
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A former member wrote:
I came back to add this to my favourites. Thank you, again.
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A former member wrote:
Holy shit. This tore me up and knocked me on my ass. For such a short write, it packed so much pain and power.. my heart is aching and I just want to read it over and over and over because for some reason, i'm enjoying the reality of the pain. Thank you s
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A former member wrote:
*so much for sharing this. I will come back to it often. Fuck, I had to pause this comment and re-read the damn thing. The whole blaming part - it's absolutely killing me. I so need to shut up..
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On Wednesday, March 2, 2005, Sin
(1168) wrote:
this was dripping in pain...it hurt to read..
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On Saturday, February 19, 2005, purr_verse
(1060) wrote:
desperation, crushing; the sense of helplessness and despair in this is vivid and real. Powerful write.
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On Saturday, February 19, 2005, K_Love
(525) wrote:
Heartclenching write, the pain in this is even hard to read. The title pulls the poem all together, wonderful words.
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On Saturday, February 19, 2005, Carmina Gitana
(152) wrote:
The desperation and pain are so palpable here. Very emotional.
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A former member wrote:
very good emotion exspressed here ~~GOTHIC~~
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