For Jack

By ForestWolf

 
I already wrote this, gypsy man
jukeboxes dark, falling off trucks,
tales, spinning, turquoise shirts glinting
in the dark below,
following the music, the dance, the fights,
the well behaved.

now, on another coast, but just,
lights out, gone, an eye lost, and a life .

Good night, Jack, we ended up badly, booze does that, and fear,
but children and lovers remain,
remembering love, passion, drive, of a sorts,
creative churnings around red vinyl tables.

Although, there was that one phone call,
facilitated by a friend
across the country,
and tales of Hawaii, Dorothy Dandrige, songs and Catholics oh hell
I don't  remember but you laughed, as you did,
and about that eye,
we knew that one
was coming.
 

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Copyright 2014 ForestWolf
Published on Wednesday, February 26, 2014.     Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Friday, May 5, 2023, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    This was a picture, a journey, a short movie. Life, intrigue, love, lust, adventure, consequences and everything inbetween.

  • carlosjackal On Friday, May 5, 2023, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Can't get enough of this piece. And that punchline ending that caps a firecracker to the brilliant conversational tone of the entire poem. Proper love it, I do :)

  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, February 6, 2024, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    Yep. I'm back again for another read of this classic.

  • FadedBlues On Wednesday, February 26, 2014, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...great write. romance & friendships...

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