Silly Rabbit
By Clydes_Bonnie
A pretty lady
in heels and a hemi
he told me it was love
a lit smoke
bass a'blarin
and as I held my middle finger up
he told me it was love
thick liner
golden skulls
and a
leather jacket
he told me it was love
silly rabbit
I'm
quite the habit
they always say that it is love
Â
you
will never be..
Â
She has got this way
unintentionally
a cemetary
the way the dead will flock to her
but these moths
can only ever see
the manufactured light
she never was alive
just a production of ease
for the blind
an inevitable burn
out
Â
you will never be anything..
Â
She has got this way
of mystery
a closed book locked in the
attic
a dark cloud in a blue sky
a pill poppin alcholic at
13
shes got the passion
the danger
and the borderline mind
You will never be anything more than.....
I will light the way for you my dear
I will soothe you like a drug
You may rest you head against my shoulder
Just promise me that
You will never say that it is love
You will never be anything more than a poem
Comments on "Silly Rabbit"
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On Saturday, March 2, 2024, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Woooaaah...Immense, lyrical, like a siren's song..A stunning work of art.
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On Saturday, March 2, 2024, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
...and one for the favourites' list...
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On Thursday, March 31, 2016, drasticdaydreams
(55) wrote:
This is lovely, dark and lovely. Am keeping this.
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A former member wrote:
This reminds me of someone. It's really awesome when poetry evokes emotion. I really enjoyed this one
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A former member wrote:
you're incredible. how have i not read you before?
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A former member wrote:
Ouch! Straight up. Love comes easy for some. Others find it impossible. There is something dangerous in the personality of this piece, mysterious but honest & biting. There is grit here. Appreciated muchly, Clydes.
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On Monday, March 18, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...a human life might amount to a thought, a phrase, a single line. the lucky ones get a few stanzas...
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On Monday, March 18, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Tremendous and trembling in you virtuosity, marvelous piece, thanks!