Where lies come from

By veingo

I'm so disgusted, by your ever
decaying tongue.

Constantly rotting

writhing

scabbing

oozing.


Slithering out of it's own skin.

Instantly starting to fester again.

shut up.

shut up.

shut up.

SHUT UP!



You splatter putrid


with every word you speak.

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© 2006 veingo
Published on Thursday, May 18, 2006.     Filed under: "Rage" and
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  • A former member wrote: And that’s the truth!

  • A former member wrote: Congratulations on getting Poem Of The Day! Reb:).

  • A former member wrote: Your anger is well used, and lovly. I applaud you.

  • A former member wrote: made me feel a bit uneasy..lol but very direct!

  • Mord On Tuesday, November 14, 2006, Mord (35)By person wrote:

    There was this one day a man wrote about how to spit hate...lol, dude I like this. Short and..not so honeyed sweet. :)

  • A former member wrote: right on...write on man. Hell yes. ~Lost~

  • weyvern On Tuesday, May 30, 2006, weyvern (80)By person wrote:

    a grotesque like the words of decete and evil damn i like this

  • Err0r On Saturday, May 27, 2006, Err0r (358)By person wrote:

    That was so passionate. I liked it. Reminded me of a cheap 80's Zombie comic. :D Could you imagine the tongue smacking someone in the eye though? Aha. :D Seriously though good write. :)

  • A former member wrote: this was delightfully dirty..sort of made my stomach turn, at your images, disgustingly wonderful.."Slithering out of it's own skin." i thank you for the wicked case of the shivers i have from reading this ;) great write, ron. ♥

  • Guillotine On Monday, May 22, 2006, Guillotine (168)By person wrote:

    breathe....sit, and take a deeeep breath. And then kill me again. ~Guill

  • D3ADT0WN On Friday, May 19, 2006, D3ADT0WN (185)By person wrote:

    So much anger! Yeah anger galore....You're madness is like busting out of the screen in front of me...Great job on this.

  • TaintedButterfly On Friday, May 19, 2006, TaintedButterfly (653)By person wrote:

    Talk about STFU and anger galore! Woo- I had to take a bit of a step back cuz your rage flew off the screen! Wow V, you've done it again. *bravo* Julia~

  • AniDayz On Friday, May 19, 2006, AniDayz (812)By person wrote:

    intense and vocal from a place that resonates...theres much energy within this that you have given out and is recieved, respectfully.

  • Saschwann On Thursday, May 18, 2006, Saschwann (13)By person wrote:

    I read it three times in rapid succession and decided that I absolutely love it.

  • Dissolving Poet On Thursday, May 18, 2006, Dissolving Poet (560)By person wrote:

    OMFG RON! this was just eewwwie awesome it crawled my skin twisted my stomach did I mention I love you! this was great

  • PoeticHellion On Thursday, May 18, 2006, PoeticHellion (191)By person wrote:

    *shudders* That was intense.

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