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~741 Hz~
By soul_versing
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outside of this shell,
I am,
energy and light;
where a humbled heart
transforms the mind.
inside of this shell,
i am,
oneness.
your words hold no meaning,
I'm only fluent in actions.
your thoughts and perceptions
do not give life to my foundation;
because my stability lies within
the framework.
i am. light.
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Copyright 2020 J.L. Verdiguel
Published on Thursday, May 14, 2020.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Author's Note:
Awaking of my intuition. 💋Comments on "~741 Hz~"
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On Wednesday, May 20, 2020, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703)
wrote:
This piece had the sense of the profound hanging about it. I particularly loved the line, “I’m only flient in actions†- always a treat to see something new from you. Ciao, T/S
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On Sunday, May 17, 2020, tonebone
(51) wrote:
PS. Nice allusion in the title
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On Sunday, May 17, 2020, tonebone
(51) wrote:
S.V. I read this piece several times but from the very first time I felt a sense of something beyond familial and was cemented with your profound epiphany "your words hold no meaning I'm only fluent in actions" which stands extremely well as a self sustaining truth, but then you kindly deliver a tenet that I've found a great deal of comfort in and that's the idea that oppositions exist in perfect harmony without apology or explanation. I intuitively sense lesser beings cringe at this concept because they have a distorted vision of control not yet rectified by a particular lesson in sentience. Anyway I'm no sage, (although I sometimes play one in these forums),LOL I recognise in many of your works that I've pondered a larger sense of what it is to "be"... I found this work to have great form and presentation which delivered its message with thought and precision and i'm looking forward to more! ...tonebone
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On Friday, May 15, 2020, Star
(920) wrote:
i’m saving this.
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On Friday, May 15, 2020, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
Aaaaargh...Looks like I need to renew my upgrade as I'm out of bookmarks. Suffice to say, this is maybe my all time fave from you. Succinct brilliance that hits the perfect notes.
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On Friday, May 15, 2020, carlosjackal
(3011) wrote:
That's better :0)
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On Thursday, May 14, 2020, Phalanx
(678) wrote:
This sounds like, gravity. An undeniable force that brings you back to your self. This one makes me think. Nice, write.
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On Thursday, May 14, 2020, Candy Cain
(54) wrote:
absolutely true. and magnificent. great write as always yo.
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