~741 Hz~

By soul_versing




outside of this shell,
I am,
energy and light;
where a humbled heart
transforms the mind.

inside of this shell,
i am,
your words hold no meaning,
I'm only fluent in actions.

your thoughts and perceptions 
do not give life to my foundation;
because my stability lies within
the framework.

i am. light.





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Copyright 2020 J.L. Verdiguel
Published on Thursday, May 14, 2020.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Awaking of my intuition. đź’‹
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  • TropicalSnowstorm On Wednesday, May 20, 2020, TropicalSnowstorm (1773)By person wrote:

    This piece had the sense of the profound hanging about it. I particularly loved the line, “I’m only flient in actions” - always a treat to see something new from you. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • tonebone On Sunday, May 17, 2020, tonebone (54)By person wrote:

    PS. Nice allusion in the title

  • tonebone On Sunday, May 17, 2020, tonebone (54)By person wrote:

    S.V. I read this piece several times but from the very first time I felt a sense of something beyond familial and was cemented with your profound epiphany "your words hold no meaning I'm only fluent in actions" which stands extremely well as a self sustaining truth, but then you kindly deliver a tenet that I've found a great deal of comfort in and that's the idea that oppositions exist in perfect harmony without apology or explanation. I intuitively sense lesser beings cringe at this concept because they have a distorted vision of control not yet rectified by a particular lesson in sentience. Anyway I'm no sage, (although I sometimes play one in these forums),LOL I recognise in many of your works that I've pondered a larger sense of what it is to "be"... I found this work to have great form and presentation which delivered its message with thought and precision and i'm looking forward to more! ...tonebone

  • Star On Friday, May 15, 2020, Star (1185)By person wrote:

    i’m saving this.

  • carlosjackal On Friday, May 15, 2020, carlosjackal (2576)By person wrote:

    Aaaaargh...Looks like I need to renew my upgrade as I'm out of bookmarks. Suffice to say, this is maybe my all time fave from you. Succinct brilliance that hits the perfect notes.

  • carlosjackal On Friday, May 15, 2020, carlosjackal (2576)By person wrote:

    That's better :0)

  • Phalanx On Thursday, May 14, 2020, Phalanx (676)By person wrote:

    This sounds like, gravity. An undeniable force that brings you back to your self. This one makes me think. Nice, write.

  • Candy Cain On Thursday, May 14, 2020, Candy Cain (50)By person wrote:

    absolutely true. and magnificent. great write as always yo.

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