while we lay there staring at our bedroom wall.
By heroineyes
we lay there.
it's a beautiful symphony
composed on a cold floor.
my head resting in the
nape of your neck;
my palm on your chest.
it's pulse exudes
into my veins
turning my blue
into crimson.
each beat grows
into a crescendo
of vessels filling,
bursting, e*** exploding
like shotgun shrapnel
to the face-spilling...
your face radiates,
"we should paint it red"
i smiled and you couldn't
figure out why.
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© 2009 heroineyes
Published on Thursday, March 12, 2009.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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On Sunday, July 9, 2023, carlosjackal
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Perfection.
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A former member wrote:
Very well done- intimacy well handled. You painted the picture with interesting eyes
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful.
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A former member wrote:
splattering of an ending; sublime and metamorphic. . .. crazy good.
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On Thursday, March 12, 2009, TheUltimateOutlaw
(43) wrote:
really intense.
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A former member wrote:
god, heroin. this was amazing.. I wouldn't complain if you were to come back a little more often ;)