while we lay there staring at our bedroom wall.

By heroineyes

we lay there.
it's a beautiful symphony
composed on a cold floor.

my head resting in the
nape of your neck;
my palm on your chest.

it's pulse exudes
into my veins
turning my blue

into crimson.

each beat grows
into a crescendo
of vessels filling,

bursting, e*** exploding
like shotgun shrapnel
to the face-spilling...

your face radiates,
"we should paint it red"
i smiled and you couldn't

figure out why.

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© 2009 heroineyes
Published on Thursday, March 12, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Sunday, July 9, 2023, carlosjackal (3016)By person wrote:

    Perfection.

  • A former member wrote: Very well done- intimacy well handled. You painted the picture with interesting eyes

  • A former member wrote: Beautiful.

  • A former member wrote: splattering of an ending; sublime and metamorphic. . .. crazy good.

  • TheUltimateOutlaw On Thursday, March 12, 2009, TheUltimateOutlaw (44)By person wrote:

    really intense.

  • A former member wrote: god, heroin. this was amazing.. I wouldn't complain if you were to come back a little more often ;)

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