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I met my mom at arbys
By King_Crazy_Dave
she got a grilled-
i was reading her shirt
and cheese
and
her hair smelled like
purple hairspray
and it made me remember
and she paid in change
and it made me remember
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Copyright 2012 clickpopsnap
Published on Thursday, April 5, 2012.
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"Poetry"
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On Monday, January 14, 2019, Jonas Robinson
(849)
wrote:
I feel hungered to change. :)
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On Thursday, January 4, 2018, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
I remember when you wrote/posted this... I think of her and you during the Christmas season.
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On Thursday, March 23, 2017, Miss Von Mad Hatter
(9) wrote:
Short and to the point But in that short time you put alot of feeling it. I like it makes me think of my family life
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On Thursday, November 10, 2016, carlosjackal
(2788) wrote:
Those last 2 lines......Fuck.
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A former member wrote:
This poem is so far out there that it made me remember. . .
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On Thursday, February 20, 2014, DarkDruidess
(313) wrote:
Remember what? I am dying to know...this left me hanging, which I suppose it was supposed to...yeah I remember...
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A former member wrote:
Hmm interesting and revolting somehow I can't put my finger on it. hmm
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On Friday, December 6, 2013, inhisbelly
(39) wrote:
Something about this turned my stomach as well. It made me think of broken families and small towns and tornadoes and weeping in bathroom stalls. Now that I say that, I'm reminded of the movie Gummo (a screwed up indie flick with disturbing storylines and spanish metal). I am simultaneously intrigued and off put by the stream of feelings and images this evoked. Interesting work. Thank you for sharing.
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On Saturday, December 7, 2013, King_Crazy_Dave
(45) wrote:
oh gummo. "fuckin rabbit you smell like piss! kill him!"
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On Friday, August 17, 2012, Dreaming in Stanzas
(293) wrote:
3 cheers for mother issues. Been there, and this is awesome!
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On Thursday, July 12, 2012, Alchemist
(679) wrote:
Sounds like a dream, remembering on the fringe.
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A former member wrote:
deja-vu. For rea. Except I lost her at Arbys. Love this. Thanks for sharing and welcome to The Valley.
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On Thursday, May 3, 2012, The_Broken_Fox_2112
(70) wrote:
These are the things my memories are made of as well, especially those of my mother when I was young. It seems that in my growing my brain has blocked what little I could remember, though it seems that the most odd occurances remind me of that which is best left forgotten. Here's to a partial past - Cheers.
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A former member wrote:
I remember such things. Random little bits. Puzzlers. And sentimentals even when I've remembered them "not to be sentiment". I really enjoyed how this played out, trailing off in my head at the end. Nice.
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On Friday, April 6, 2012, Corinthian
(306) wrote:
Mmm purple aussie hairspray .... my mom smells like downy and dove hairspray.... I remember when I was little she gave me fruit loops in baggies and then she left me a lot ... nice style you have ......short and big big big and coloryyyy ty.
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On Thursday, April 5, 2012, Devilish
(2634) wrote:
Well I was the airport baby.. i asked her why she didnt just leave me there she said she needed a check .. probly to buy some arbys.. =).. nice memories jotting indeed. hello there you..
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On Thursday, April 5, 2012, dwells
(4180) wrote:
Some cool memory triggers, thanks for sharing.
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