Comments by inhisbelly
- "I am exceedingly appreciative of your feedback, as always. What a nice suggestion! I just changed my major from nursing back to where my heart lies and has always lied (English/creative studies!), but as far as clear cut career paths, I am undulating with the tide. Children's lit is definitely something I'll consider. I hope you're well, dear poet friend. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "Vagabond Love" by inhisbelly
- "Holy. Each line is a microcosm in itself. I am viscerally perturbed, but satisfied with that. I love words that give rise to an internal battle and unite me with the characters in a way I could never unite with the characters I meet in person. You are impressive."
Posted by inhisbelly on "Glass Mercedes" by Numbers Peppelini
- "I am so appreciative of all of your responses. Numbers, I applaud you for your thoughtfulness and thoroughness. Things have been rougher than hell lately, but writing pieces like this helps tremendously. Much love for you all. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "Mrs. Claus" by inhisbelly
- "It's unreal how beautiful this is! I am overcome with emotion. I don't believe that there are feelings women can't relate to as well (besides phallic sensations), though. The torture of longing is universal. I applaud the speakers mutedness--there is an underlying agony but no theatrics. Lovely work. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "THE PASSING" by Numbers Peppelini
- "A horrific mistress you've conjured here. I'm left in need of a hug and some Benadryl for this awful itch. Lovely write."
Posted by inhisbelly on "What Am I?" by Lady Poetry
- "A lovely illustration of the writing process. I often list things to write about, close the page, and come back later to see which one my mind subconsciously stewed over the most. My favorite line was "soft words make things hard"--sugar coating does indeed serve to further the pain. Very much enjoyed, thank you for sharing."
Posted by inhisbelly on "A Blank Piece of Paper" by Dreamscape
- "Dripping with such precise comparisons and language. I must have read this 10 or so times. Nothing short of beautiful, thank you for this. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "Flashing Lights" by Virgils Vigil
- "I had a feeling this would frighten. It was even slightly eerie playing it back to myself after recording. I'm glad you enjoyed my ominous confessions. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "Today's truths (spoken)" by inhisbelly
- "This piece made my heart flutter with anxiety. I was pleasantly surprised by the tragedy of this, as I had preconceived a lighter piece from the title. You paint some very evocative images. Thank you for sharing. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "Flower" by Lil Demon Lady
- "Ugh, this made me feel ill, only because I find it so relatable. The shameful feeling that comes with emotions not meant to be bared and behaviors/events not meant to happen is excruciating and you depicted it well here. Thanks for sharing. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "the reason I quit drinking anywhere else but home" by Sketso
- "Thank you so much, everyone! The inspiration for this poem broke my heart. It was indeed a terribly brutal situation (I'll spare the details as it is not my place to tell them) and I think of it often. It was a relief to write this. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "Fire Woman" by inhisbelly
- ""I have blown away so many futures that it seems that my past will swallow me whole" resonated with me the most, in the guilt-laden depths of my spirit. I felt such a powerful misery throughout this, and my mind was quiet and defeated at the conclusion. Intensely chilling. Thank you for sharing. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "Russian Roulette" by Malice In Wonderland
- "This is all too familiar. In the throes of depression--drink to numb it--but there's never enough--and sobriety in the morning feels like hell magnified 10,000 times. I felt such a panic and helplessness in this. Wishing you healing :) I hope writing serves as a productive escape for you. Thank you for sharing. "
Posted by inhisbelly on "I need a way out" by gearhead
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