For: who its obviously for
By Dejected_Worth
Your words echo (1/16 tremolo)
.This is not an innuendo.
This is an observation
About an angel.with broken wings
And an open window/
but for the .most part. I love
Loving you .without you knowing.
I smiled [watching you] climb up
to be beneath me
and you can't deny .that we look good together.
and i can keep you if I can catch you
But i can >not< keep you there
But (you) .can be on top.
If you prefer it .there.
And just so you know .This one. Is about you
but that doesn't mean I'd tell you
Even if you asked me .but I kind of hope you ask me.
And my pen echoes (1/16 tremolo)
But for the .most part. I love
Loving you. without you knowing
Awards
Comments on "For: who its obviously for"
-
A former member wrote:
I love it...
-
On Thursday, December 12, 2013, infinitebeing
(80) wrote:
beautifully woven write :)
-
On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, FadedBlues
(2168) wrote:
...a snapshot that you keep in your favorite book of poetry. an affair for one...
-
On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, inhisbelly
(39) wrote:
What a sweet, complex longing this depicts. The internal struggle is so real and strong here. Captivating work as always.
-
On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, blue angel
(877) wrote:
This reaches in nicely; wicked inking :)~
-
On Wednesday, December 11, 2013, dwells
(4284) wrote:
Enigmatic and this relationship sounds like a real handful. To worship from afar perhaps and await a moment's weakness. Then more waiting while coming to terms with reality - you gotta be you too, cheers and much enjoyed DW!