I Kissed A Girl...
By A Velvet Tongue
Adult eyes only ...pleasssseeee
I kissed a girl
stole the words from her mouth
as she tried to protest
until her tongue melted
and slithered to life
I touched a girl
felt her blood rush to boil
under the talent of my digits
until her thighs parted
and she begged for more
I listened to a girl
heard a thousand words escape
from one throated *growl*
until her cries turned to fury
and she left a puddle
I tasted a girl
Felt her sex quiver in release
burrowing my tongue deeper
into her slick honied depths
until my cheeks glistened
I used a girl
for my own pleasure
a selfish greed of lust
that beckoned my hips to grind
into her virginal mouth
I loved a girl
allowed her into my visions
melding into one being
that breathed as a whole
and it all started..
By kissing a girl...
Comments on "I Kissed A Girl..."
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A former member wrote:
Nicely written.
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A former member wrote:
Very Tempting to Many. I Love my Girl
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On Thursday, June 16, 2011, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Mmmmmm. kisses...
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On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, Musik2MyEyes
(192) wrote:
Oh em gee............*blushes* .........not from embarrassment either I promise. It stirs things. Nicely done (putting it mildly).
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On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, punk mc cool
(74) wrote:
i was kinda bored >.> but nice write
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On Tuesday, March 17, 2009, IAmNorge
(38) wrote:
the way you made lust and love almost melt together is noteworthy, very nice
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On Sunday, December 7, 2008, Dejected_Worth
(81) wrote:
wow
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On Wednesday, July 16, 2008, Adam
(242) wrote:
hmmm, I too am interested in girls :P... Boy does this make me want to jump into a relationship headfirst. Way to tease, way to write, way to live life to its fullest - Adam
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On Tuesday, November 13, 2007, Niemand
(355) wrote:
I think I'll start kissing girls again...Nice write.-Airi
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On Tuesday, June 27, 2006, Dei
(663) wrote:
this was captured beautifully. well done.
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On Monday, May 8, 2006, Mari
(419) wrote:
maybe i should kiss a girl
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A former member wrote:
that's exactly how it works... and i thank you for pointing that out to all my new gf's to come...literally
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On Sunday, May 22, 2005, Loneal
(86) wrote:
Very nice ... I wonder if I'll ever get that experience ;) ~L./Syn.Dark.
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On Friday, May 6, 2005, BleedSilver
(298) wrote:
Very good. I usually don't comment on these, but this was awesome.
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On Friday, May 6, 2005, void
(35) wrote:
wow... very... now i want to have sex. ~V~
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On Wednesday, March 16, 2005, sIo
(898) wrote:
wonderful ending...kickass write
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On Wednesday, March 16, 2005, The Crimson Queen
(917) wrote:
damn..erotic..amazing...WOW!
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On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, Sticky Kitty
(241) wrote:
made me wet. I loved this. great descriptions -kitty
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A former member wrote:
made me hot. very excellent. love your poetry -jj
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On Saturday, September 25, 2004, xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx
(36) wrote:
That makes me want to go over to my best friend's house and do some fun stuff.:)
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A former member wrote:
i love this poem ^.^
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A former member wrote:
soo steammy... your bi? How nice :)
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On Sunday, June 27, 2004, murder_in_clubland
(384) wrote:
amazing...this gave me shivers and turned me on...yum~ss
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A former member wrote:
let the truth be told!
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On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
You work such magic. This was like a rush to the head. I can't stop imagining...
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A former member wrote:
Can't believe I hadn't read this before. Next time can I watch? ~Ryan
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On Sunday, October 26, 2003, Loserland
(113) wrote:
oh yeah that's what i'm talking about...very erotic
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A former member wrote:
this si delightful, sexy and alluring. just a wonderful write.
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A former member wrote:
Complete full circle. And it always starts with kissing...such an innocent thing can lead to so much. *sigh*
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On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Chalin
(16) wrote:
I hate to post on something that's already been so commented on, but it must be said that this is an amazing piece. reminds me of The Goddess Cher. thanks for sharing.
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On Sunday, September 7, 2003, Bluegirl
(177) wrote:
I agree.. It does sound like cher :)
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On Friday, August 29, 2003, asailorsangel
(34) wrote:
My my your my kind of girl, this took me to a moment I shared with one of my very best friends yes plural,ummm need to go clean up now =)
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A former member wrote:
very sweet ;). I like the this goes, but I think that you could do an even better piece on a similar subject. Not quite up to the standard I've come to expect from you. ;) (very high, hehe) but good nonetheless. Kinda givin the guys all the inside i
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A former member wrote:
.....yeah, what he said.
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A former member wrote:
nfo that they could ever want on such an experience, or occurance. :)
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A former member wrote:
oooohhhh
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A former member wrote:
Hehe, I really liked it!
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On Wednesday, July 30, 2003, Blood of Winter
(296) wrote:
Yeah, see just when I stopped thinking about sex for 2.59 seconds your words come stampeding in like a herd of pornstars. Very erotic.
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On Tuesday, August 5, 2003, A Velvet Tongue
(434) wrote:
A herd of pornstars...I wonder what fun they will bring with them?..heh
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On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, Crystal Passion
(221) wrote:
oh my... and with that my mind is a bit over loaded at the moment
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A former member wrote:
yum! Muff sammich!
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On Monday, July 28, 2003, Ravenblade
(307) wrote:
Velvet, love, you never cease to amaze me with the great eroticism you use...if only I could have that talent while describing my many pleasures...then again you're the talented one...keep it up
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On Sunday, July 27, 2003, Moodswing
(63) wrote:
who would have guessed...how will i ever look at you the same... *chuckles* just kidding...loved it..bravo!!!
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A former member wrote:
well this was interesting and yumm...
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On Sunday, July 27, 2003, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
This is wonderful, so much comes from so little. Good write.
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A former member wrote:
I really like this...but all I had starting from the top when I read the title was the little mermaid...i'll read it in a bit and see if I don't have that song stuck in my head...I REALLY LIKED IT...even to the tune of Kissed the girl...darkcloud
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On Sunday, July 27, 2003, blackdarkness
(227) wrote:
I love it...girls are good kissers....