I Kissed A Girl...

By A Velvet Tongue

Adult eyes only ...pleasssseeee

I kissed a girl
stole the words from her mouth
as she tried to protest
until her tongue melted
and slithered to life

I touched a girl
felt her blood rush to boil
under the talent of my digits
until her thighs parted
and she begged for more

I listened to a girl
heard a thousand words escape
from one throated *growl*
until her cries turned to fury
and she left a puddle

I tasted a girl
Felt her sex quiver in release
burrowing my tongue deeper
into her slick honied depths
until my cheeks glistened

I used a girl
for my own pleasure
a selfish greed of lust
that beckoned my hips to grind
into her virginal mouth

I loved a girl
allowed her into my visions
melding into one being
that breathed as a whole
and it all started..

By kissing a girl...

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Copyright 2003 Beverly L. Hernandez
Published on Sunday, July 27, 2003.     Filed under: "Erotica" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Nicely written.

  • A former member wrote: Very Tempting to Many. I Love my Girl

  • Devilish On Thursday, June 16, 2011, Devilish (2658)By person wrote:

    Mmmmmm. kisses... Scholar

  • Musik2MyEyes On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, Musik2MyEyes (193)By person wrote:

    Oh em gee............*blushes* .........not from embarrassment either I promise. It stirs things. Nicely done (putting it mildly).

  • punk mc cool On Wednesday, February 24, 2010, punk mc cool (75)By person wrote:

    i was kinda bored >.> but nice write

  • IAmNorge On Tuesday, March 17, 2009, IAmNorge (39)By person wrote:

    the way you made lust and love almost melt together is noteworthy, very nice

  • Dejected_Worth On Sunday, December 7, 2008, Dejected_Worth (84)By person wrote:

    wow

  • Adam On Wednesday, July 16, 2008, Adam (245)By person wrote:

    hmmm, I too am interested in girls :P... Boy does this make me want to jump into a relationship headfirst. Way to tease, way to write, way to live life to its fullest - Adam Scholar

  • Niemand On Tuesday, November 13, 2007, Niemand (361)By person wrote:

    I think I'll start kissing girls again...Nice write.-Airi

  • Dei On Tuesday, June 27, 2006, Dei (665)By person wrote:

    this was captured beautifully. well done.

  • Mari On Monday, May 8, 2006, Mari (425)By person wrote:

    maybe i should kiss a girl

  • A former member wrote: that's exactly how it works... and i thank you for pointing that out to all my new gf's to come...literally

  • Loneal On Sunday, May 22, 2005, Loneal (86)By person wrote:

    Very nice ... I wonder if I'll ever get that experience ;) ~L./Syn.Dark.

  • BleedSilver On Friday, May 6, 2005, BleedSilver (298)By person wrote:

    Very good. I usually don't comment on these, but this was awesome.

  • void On Friday, May 6, 2005, void (35)By person wrote:

    wow... very... now i want to have sex. ~V~

  • sIo On Wednesday, March 16, 2005, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    wonderful ending...kickass write

  • The Crimson Queen On Wednesday, March 16, 2005, The Crimson Queen (918)By person wrote:

    damn..erotic..amazing...WOW!

  • Sticky Kitty On Wednesday, February 9, 2005, Sticky Kitty (242)By person wrote:

    made me wet. I loved this. great descriptions -kitty

  • A former member wrote: made me hot. very excellent. love your poetry -jj

  • xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx On Saturday, September 25, 2004, xDeAthxPerCepTioNxReaLiTyx (36)By person wrote:

    That makes me want to go over to my best friend's house and do some fun stuff.:)

  • A former member wrote: i love this poem ^.^

  • A former member wrote: soo steammy... your bi? How nice :)

  • murder_in_clubland On Sunday, June 27, 2004, murder_in_clubland (388)By person wrote:

    amazing...this gave me shivers and turned me on...yum~ss

  • A former member wrote: let the truth be told!

  • Alanarchy On Tuesday, December 9, 2003, Alanarchy (1200)By person wrote:

    You work such magic. This was like a rush to the head. I can't stop imagining...

  • A former member wrote: Can't believe I hadn't read this before. Next time can I watch? ~Ryan

  • Loserland On Sunday, October 26, 2003, Loserland (113)By person wrote:

    oh yeah that's what i'm talking about...very erotic

  • A former member wrote: this si delightful, sexy and alluring. just a wonderful write.

  • A former member wrote: Complete full circle. And it always starts with kissing...such an innocent thing can lead to so much. *sigh*

  • Chalin On Thursday, September 4, 2003, Chalin (16)By person wrote:

    I hate to post on something that's already been so commented on, but it must be said that this is an amazing piece. reminds me of The Goddess Cher. thanks for sharing.

  • Bluegirl On Sunday, September 7, 2003, Bluegirl (177)By person wrote:

    I agree.. It does sound like cher :)

  • asailorsangel On Friday, August 29, 2003, asailorsangel (34)By person wrote:

    My my your my kind of girl, this took me to a moment I shared with one of my very best friends yes plural,ummm need to go clean up now =)

  • A former member wrote: very sweet ;). I like the this goes, but I think that you could do an even better piece on a similar subject. Not quite up to the standard I've come to expect from you. ;) (very high, hehe) but good nonetheless. Kinda givin the guys all the inside i

  • A former member wrote: .....yeah, what he said.

  • A former member wrote: nfo that they could ever want on such an experience, or occurance. :)

  • A former member wrote: oooohhhh

  • A former member wrote: Hehe, I really liked it!

  • Blood of Winter On Wednesday, July 30, 2003, Blood of Winter (296)By person wrote:

    Yeah, see just when I stopped thinking about sex for 2.59 seconds your words come stampeding in like a herd of pornstars. Very erotic.

  • A Velvet Tongue On Tuesday, August 5, 2003, A Velvet Tongue (436)By person wrote:

    A herd of pornstars...I wonder what fun they will bring with them?..heh

  • Crystal Passion On Wednesday, October 8, 2003, Crystal Passion (221)By person wrote:

    oh my... and with that my mind is a bit over loaded at the moment

  • A former member wrote: yum! Muff sammich!

  • Ravenblade On Monday, July 28, 2003, Ravenblade (313)By person wrote:

    Velvet, love, you never cease to amaze me with the great eroticism you use...if only I could have that talent while describing my many pleasures...then again you're the talented one...keep it up

  • Moodswing On Sunday, July 27, 2003, Moodswing (63)By person wrote:

    who would have guessed...how will i ever look at you the same... *chuckles* just kidding...loved it..bravo!!!

  • A former member wrote: well this was interesting and yumm...

  • Six-Out On Sunday, July 27, 2003, Six-Out (1435)By person wrote:

    This is wonderful, so much comes from so little. Good write.

  • A former member wrote: I really like this...but all I had starting from the top when I read the title was the little mermaid...i'll read it in a bit and see if I don't have that song stuck in my head...I REALLY LIKED IT...even to the tune of Kissed the girl...darkcloud

  • blackdarkness On Sunday, July 27, 2003, blackdarkness (228)By person wrote:

    I love it...girls are good kissers....

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