in the rundown restaraunt, where i carved your name into my arm
By heroineyes
our eyes are reflections
of january's blue-green dusk.
"put yourself into letters,
paint Me, sing of Me,
and we'll last for eternity!"
Her lines are perfect
as She pulls my arms
around Her hips;
we fall onto the the bed
and through the stars.
My breath on her neck
(like spring's warm breeze)
brings two bodies
into a single movement.
our porcelain hearts, intertwined,
like a spider's delicate silk.
my lips graze Hers,
and Her whisper
makes me shiver.
A sharp bite like shards of glass
borrowed from broken mirrors,
and Her intoxicating poison begins to flow.
my fingers trace her ivory chest
with the sanguine holy water;
they speak their own language
stencilling in Your gentle curves.
and this poem, itself, is a sin
with two stars shimmering for the other.
here, i can think of nothing
more fair or more warm
than her lovely soul
within Her lovely form.
when i ask:
"what shall i write?"
She responds:
"put yourself into letters,
paint me, sing of me,
and we'll last for eternity!"
when i ask:
"what shall i call You?"
She responds:
"call Me yours, Venus or Muse
whatever suits the place and time,
so long as, you make Me Your rhyme!"
Awards
Comments on "in the rundown restaraunt, where i carved your name into my arm"
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On Monday, December 18, 2017, Cassette
(1087) wrote:
really, really well-written, my friend.
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On Thursday, March 27, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
"paint Me, sing of Me, and we'll last for eternity!" Her lines are perfect as She pulls my arms around Her hips; we fall onto the the bed and through the stars." - wonderful poetry! Ciao, T/S
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A former member wrote:
This is amazingly written. Gave me feels as i read it. Good one!
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A former member wrote:
What a wonderful way to feel about someone you love....
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On Monday, October 6, 2008, Narcissa
(391) wrote:
Beautiful. To know such love is a gift. Treasure it...Loved this.
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A former member wrote:
It is beautiful! i love it well done!
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A former member wrote:
I have always adored the title of this, and the poem does not disappoint. Such a beautiful, heartfelt sentiment. Well done.
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On Friday, July 25, 2008, The Lipstick Factor
(287) wrote:
beautiful, eloquent, i too felt some shivers...
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A former member wrote:
Amazing...sent little shivers down my spine...a very hauntingly beautiful verse...it's faved
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A former member wrote:
in conjured up a great feeling inside..
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A former member wrote:
heartfelt. very well done.
~ hdb
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On Friday, July 25, 2008, Rhys Ki
(68) wrote:
oh, my goodness.... darling. this is just as moon says, delicious. you ravish my thoughts.
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On Saturday, July 26, 2008, Mars
(323) wrote:
i'm mars :D